I'm so sorry
Hey guys. So, I know I haven't been updating for a while, mostly because of the quarantine and lack of inspiration and motivation to do anything anymore. And I'm really sorry for that, because not wanting to do anything is not a valid reason to not do my 'job'. So, I hope you can forgive me on that. But, because of this long 'break' I was able to work on my writing skills with the drafts that I have packed away on Google docs for when this story is completed. But, after much growth and reading back on the previous chapters, I have come to a conclusion.
This story sucks.
It's really bad.
Like, really bad.
I started this book when I was what? 12 or 13? And now being 15 going on 16, I have matured a lot more and realized the flaws in the story. Vixen is slightly OP and Mary-sueish. And I don't mean that in the sense of her having too many magical powers, being unreasonably and stunningly gorgeous and having every living creature who even knows of her existence falling in love with her and devoting their lives to her. I mean it in the sense that she's always right about everything and always knows what to do in every situation. To the point where it is annoying. Plus, some of her dialogue is just awkward and break up serious points in the story.
Like, what in the hell is a fly on the wall? And she just randomly finds a truck and rams the cockroach terminator? And she randomly knows Japanese? This is the stuff that I'm talking about. I'm pretty sure that the beginning of the story was just my 12 year old self trying to reflect who I wanted to be onto the story, and then my older self just went along with it. So this is why I have decided to restart the story and do everything over. A nice fresh start. I know this is inconvenient for all of you. First off, the last chapter is simply the first half of 'Pulverizer Returns' so you won't see the end until later. Secondly, I only had 4 and a half more episodes to go. But honestly, it would take more effort to force this garbage out than just to redo everything.
There are going to be a few changes for the better. For one, I won't break these into 2 part stories like I used to. They are still way too long when split in half, so maybe I'll do thirds or quarters. Something like that so you're not overwhelmed with too much. Plus, it'll extend the book a bit longer. And I'll make the character's interactions less forced and more slow and steady. Third, I'm changing Vixen's background. Being from the real world won't count towards anything, especially if she can't remember her past life. So, this is it. I'll leave everything right here and start a new book.
Edit: The new book is out. Just go to my profile and you'll see it. It's called Mutants in the City: Just the Beginning
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