OK BEFORE YOU READ ANY FURTHER LET ME GET MY POINT CLEAR! I LOVE ANIME FANFICS OK?!?! THERE ARE ONLY SOME THAT I DON'T REALLY TAKE A LIKING TO BUT THATS ABOUT IT! I LOVE MOST FANFICS! (Mostly yaoi tho) IF YOU FOUND ANY OF MY CHAPTER OFFENSIVE THEN I DO NOT KNOW WHAT TO DO ABOUT IT! (Gomenasaiii~.~) LIKE IVE SAID BEFORE THIS IS OFFENSIVE! READ. AT. YOUR. OWN. RISK. DON'T. BLAME. WATASHI.

okeeeeeee!!! The actual story:

STOP DESCRIBING EVERY SINGLE DETAILS OF THE SHOW!

I get it I get it, you want your fanfics to be detailistic (it's not a word I know but roll with it) as possible but I don't think it's necessary to describe everything.

It's annoying for those who have already watched the whole thing because it makes them feel like they're reviewing the show but in reading-way and its hella boring. Not to mention, it's definitely a big fat spoiler for those who haven't.

Change the plot a bit! Jinxed it up! But not too much and make it a whole other story. (Unless it's an AU 'Alternate Universe') Just be creative! Be cool B)

(DISCLAIMER!!! IM NO AUTHOR OR SPECIALIST WRITER OR ANY OF THAT JAZZ! IM JUST A HIGH-SCHOOL GIRL WHO'S EXPRESSING HER OWN OPINIONS ON FANFICS SO DONT. TAKE. THIS. SERIOUSLY. Ok? That's all I wanted to say, baiiiiii~~~~)