Emo chick on her period.
Ok so... Fanfictions again... Haha, I seem to rant to much. Anyway, emo cutter chicks, so if your super affended by my stupid ranting shit them please stop reading, it's really boring having to hear people go on about how cutting is their 'release' 😱 that's great, I don't care people who cut are losers that's it anyway moving along.
So fanfictions, I have been reading lots of phan fictions ❤️ and it seems that Dan or Phil start cutting in most the story's I've read. I find it rather boring because I couldn't see Dan or Phil cutting, i just think they would be the kinds of people that would binge watch seasons of British bake off and eat ice cream not use razor blades to harm themselves. I think it would be more entertaining to see this -
Dan sat uncomfortably on his red, lumpy, couch sighed and searched for his remote. After finding it under a pillow he raised an eyebrow then turn on the TV only to find British bake-off, seem to be a marathon going on so he thought, might as well, Phil was going to be gone for awhile, that's how he dealt with his anger. While this was how Dan dealt with anger, he mutter to himself something about ice cream and got up to go to the fridge. He opened the freezer door and pulled out a small tub of ice cream that was already half finished, he noticed a spoon was already in the tub and went back to the couch and sat down and started to eat the ice cream and make death plots for the shows judges. After five minutes he wondered where the spoon came from, after deducing that Phil was the one that left the spoon in the ice cream tub he cringed slightly but then shook his head. Inside he told himself that he was indirectly kissing Phil, making him crack a smile.
I think I like this much better then this:
Phil sat on the toilet seat and grabbed one of his spare razor blades and bite his lip as he placed the blade to his wrist, he wasn't sure why he did this but it seemed to help. Slicing his pale skin he felt his tears drip down his cheeks. Dan hated him, probably hated gays too! Phil felt like an idiot, why did he have to love Dan, it was so painful. But so magical at the same time. Time seemed to go in slow motion as Dan walked into the bathroom to only find Phil cutting at his wrists. Dan and Phil screamed in shock at each other and Phil felt embarrassed, while Dan felt horrible. His best friend and flatmate was cutting! Dan suddenly had the urge to kiss Phil, maybe it would make him feel better. The brunette leaned in and kissed Phil on the lips with an unknown passion.
Ok so I wanna know what one you liked better number 1 or 2? I loved number one a lot it was more fun to wright and it seemed a lot more original, the second one was just unoriginal and happens in every phanfic ever. On maybe not all, but a lot. It just seems very out of character for Dan or Phil to cut or self harm in anyway. That's it.
-M
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