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Neil comes down and everyone greets him 

Prakash and few other elders hugs him and blesses him 

Ashish : Happy birthday my boy

Neil smiles slightly and Ashish hugs him 

Neil : How r u uncle ?

Ashish : I am fine beta

Neil smiles and takes blessing from neela who is beside Ashish 

Neela : Always be happy bacha

Neil smiles and moves to meet others 

Ashish finds Avni alone and walks towards her 

Ashish : Avni beta

Avni turns towards Ashish in shock 

Ashish : Avni i know

Avni : i dont want to talk to u or hear u, not now not ever

saying this she goes from there making ashsih very sad but he knows that he deserves it

After sometime neil cuts the cake prepared by his mother and wife 

He genuinely wants to feed the first piece to Avni and he does it making her shock 

She too feeds him , juhi fumes in jealousy 

All were busy in themselves , talking and enjoying the drinks but Neil is restless , he wanted to talk to Avni and stop their fight and wanted to explain her the situation 

Neil goes to avni who is avoiding him like a plague , she not even for once wished him , how much he wanted to hear her voice , he wanted her to wish him 

Before avni can move away neil holds her hand 

Avni : Neil leave my hand (she whispers)

Neil : once listen to me Avni 

Avni : I will but only when u let her go away , i dont want her to be ur PA

Neil : I want to mend things that doesnt mean u will over react and order me , i do what i want , here i am trying to explain u the situation and u r being stubborn idiot

Avni : oh really , i am the stubborn idiot now ? then who r u ? Get the hell out of here neil 

she is shocking him today and he now knows she is really very very angry at him 

Neil : Shut up Avni , u dont tell me what to do 

Avni : Fine then i am leaving 

avni goes away from there leaving him frustrated 

After the party Only Ashish's family were there as Prakash insists them to stay 

Ashish : The party went well 

Prakash : Yes Ashish ji and all thanks to Avni beta , u organized it very well 

Avni just smiles and juhi fumes in anger and jealousy 

Ali  who is using his mobile suddenly shouts seeing something in his mobile 

Ali : what the hell 

Neil : What happened Ali

Avni : is everything alright ?

Ali : Switch on the TV and put on any news channel

They switch on the tv and everyone gets shocked seeing the news

Neil : What the hell , who did this ?

Everyone gets very angry seeing the news except Juhi , she fakes that she is sad and angry with the news

Swetha :What is this Neil 

Neil looks at avni and then at swetha

Neil :even i dont know maa , how ridiculous these people are , who ever it is , i wont leave them 

Ashish immediately calls someone : i dont know what u will do , i want the news to vanish as soon as possible (he orders some one on the call) , how can they stoop so low , my daughter is not having any affair with PM , he is her Jiju and her best friend , how can they just post anything nonsense

Avni has tears in her eyes and looks at Neil who is already looking at her 

Neil : I really dont know how -- , i --, she was just wishing me 

Avni runs towards her room , Neils gets worried and runs behind her 

Here juhi fakes her cry

Avneils room:

Neil : Avni listen to me 

Avni : stop it neil , u dont have to say anything , i trust u neil , i know what happened i can see it but tell me one thing do u really think that u did not do any mistake ?

Neil : do u really trust me avni ? i dont think so , y r u making a mountain out of a molehill , its just a matter of few seconds the news will be vanished and it was not any wrong thing , she just wished me which u did not till now (he mocked her making her flinch) and she is my best friend and let people think anything i dont care , i will just not leave them who are making false statements

Avni : remember last time ? 

Neil frowns in confusion 

Avni : last time when the same happened with me and Ali? 

neel gets shocked 

Avni : u caged me , u arrested me in home , now tell me what should i do with u ?

Neil doesnt have any answer 

Avni : huhhh leave that i know u dont have any answer , but neil i hope u learned ur lesson 

Neil is very guilty , he now knows what he did was a grave mistake at that time 

Avni : and how dare u say that i did not wished u ? u very well know that Mr Khanna  i have called u not once but many times to wish u , but u know what  dont deserve it , u dont deserve my wishes and just get the hell away from my view for now i ant bare anymore 

Neil looks at her who is now crying , he tries to go close to her but avni stops him 

Avni : no dont come near me 

Neil : Avni once 

Anvi : no neil now i will only listen to u when u make her go away from ur life , i just hate her , i hate u to make me feel like this Neil , go away from me , i dont want u here near me 

Neil goes towards her and hugs her tightly and she breaks down in his arms

Avni : y neil , y do u do this all the time , what did i do to u ? u urself married me , i did not force u right ? i loved u and u ? what r u doing ? i didnt ask u to love me back but the least u could do is respect me and my decisions neil.

Neil : Avni ssshh , please dont cry 

Avni : then stop making me cry Neil , even i deserve to be happy na neil 

She looks at neil with her innocent eyes

Neil kisses her eyes one by one , he gently picks her up and sits on the bed , he gently kisses her forehead and she snuggles more into him 

Even though she is angry at him , she doesnt want to leave him , not at this moment , not after seeing juhi hugging him and definitely not after the fake news which says neil has an affair with his PA

Neil : Sorry Avni , i will never again let anyone think like this , even i cannot bare anyone linking my name with anyone other than u , u r the only one who will be know as my life partner , the Wife .

Avni hugs him more tightly , she is relieved when neil talks this.

Avni : u know Neil , down Papa was yelling at someone for making false statement on Juhi , he never did anything for me , he never supported me , he never believed me , he always accused me , only and only because of that Juhi.

I hate her neil , i hate her to the core, when she was born i was the happiest person thinking that i got an angel as a small sister but she is villain in my life Neil  , she is the most cruelest person i have ever seen.

Neil : No avni y dont u try mend things between u 

Avni gets angry when neil says so

She immediately moves away from his arms 

Avni : what do u think neil ? y do u think i hate her so much ? do u know what all she did to me and what all i faced because of her , she was always jealous of me ,she always wanted my papa's and Neela Maa's love only to herself , she didnt want me in her life , she always faked everything and had put blame on me , i am the one who always had scoldings from my Papa , he always believed her as she used to fake cry but neela maa supported me until one day , from that day i lost my everything Neil 

Neil looks at her 

Avni : u know u once asked me what happened whether i had locked Juhi in dark room for 7 days or not right ? 

Neil nods his head 

Avni  no neil , i can never do that ,though i would like to do that to her after what she had done to me i would never do that neil trust me , i dont know y my parents think i kidnapped her , they even got proof against me neil , i dont know what to do , i pleaded and begged them to believe me neil , but neil they did not believe me neil , i was very helpless neil , i didnt had anyone at that time , i had no one , no one was there to ask me ifi had my dinner or not , no one was there to ask me about my whereabouts , no one believed me neil , i was all alone , i cried and cried asking them to believe me but they did not neil , they believed that fake proof over me , y would i do that neil ? not for once they talked to me neil , even neela maa did not believe me , she loved me a lot neil , no no it was not love , she did not love me , it was all her fake love but , but i loved her and trusted her a lot neil , i never for once thought that she will do this to me neil , thats y i hate Juhi neil , because of her i lost all the i have and now i dont want to lose u neil , please never leave me neil now u and our family are only my hope neil .

Neil has tears in his eyes , he immediately hugs her 

Neil : i will never leave u avni not for anyone or anything , no one can separate us not in this life 

Avni hugs him tightly , Neil tires to move away but avni hugs him tightly 

Avni : please neil dont go now 

Neil just holds her and makes her lie down on the bed , she rests her head on his chest and he kisses her forehead time to time

Neil Pov : i know u avni u can never think of harming anyone , i strongly believe u , but i am not getting one point , y all the proofs are against u , who did this to u ? juhi ? no even she cannot , i know her , she might hate u but she is not a wrong person , there is someone else involved , now i will myself find this out . I know avn u feel insecure but i will never ever leave u , u r my wife and u will always be

he kisses her temple and makes her sleep 

After checking on her he moves down to hall

Ali : where is sweety ?

Swetha : how is she beta

Even ashish and neela were worried for avni

Neil : she is fine maa , she is sleeping  she is exhausted

Ali : yes she is , since 3 days she was very eager 

Neil feels very guilty for spoiling everything , he curses himself

Neil : did u find out who is the person behind this ?

Ali : No neil but dont worry this new wont get telecasted again and i will very soon find out the person who is behind this 

Juhi gets scared but she she doesnt show it on her face

Juhi : dont worry Neil everything will be fine even dad will find out the person very soon

Neil just nods his head and looks at Ashish

Neil : Uncle i am sorry to say this , i hope u and aunty will not mind 

Everyone look at him with curiosity , Neil turns to Juhi and 

Neil : I am sorry Juhi , U r not my PA anymore (making juhi shocked)

Juhi : But Neil

Neil ; No more discussion on this Juhi , i dont want u to be my PA anymore and i dont want to create anymore problems , i hope u understand 

Juhi just rushes out in anger not knowing what to say

Ashish : we can understand Neil , its ok , we will make her understand

Neil : Thank you uncle 

Neela : No need to thank Neil , please take care of urself and Avni 

Neil just nods his head slightly 

Neela : Hmm  , i know that she did not eat anything from morning please make her eat something neil

 Neil nods his head 

After Ashish and Neela left Neil goes to his room with food 

He wakes her up

Avni : Neil please let me sleep 

Neil : avni please get up and have this 

Anvi wakes up and gets shocked as this is the first time neil is asking her to eat something and not only that he himself brought food for her

Avni pinches herself making him chuckle

Avni gets embarrassed 

Neil for the first time feeds her with his hands making her shocked , neil for once want to pamper her and make it up to her for all the past mistakes 

Avni gets emotional and has tears in her eyes , neil silently wipes her tears with left hand and feeds her food 

avni too feeds him food as she know that even he did not had anything 

Neil silently eats his food from her hand , after feeding each other they sit calmly not knowing what to speak 

avni : mm neil 

neil looks at her 

avni starts fiddling with her saree making neil frown

Neil : What avni ?

Avni : woh, h- haa-- Happy birthday 

she doesnt look at him 

only he knows how much he wanted her to wish him and then finally she wished him 

Avni looks at him as there is no reply from him , he pounces on her making her startled 

he immediately latches his lips with hers making her moan loudly

he celebrates his birthday making love to her all the night not even leaving her for a second

ok i cant let avni not wish him 

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In the next updates (dont know when) u will get to see a jealous neil :)> 

Stay safe 

Love u all