Review  #40

Written by: delwritesbooks

Reviewed by: Breanna-Dixon aka Rebekah.

Cover: The cover is beautiful! But since it has two musicians and the story is about love, maybe have two people on the cover. 

Blurb: The Blurb is done well. I honestly can say I'd read this if I came across it before. You did really well, you didn't give too much away about the story and it's short enough not to get the reader discouraged. 

First Chapter: I fell in love! But I also noticed some errors with your grammar which I'll mention more towards the end. 

Cover: 9/10

Title: 10/10

Plot: 10/10

Grammar: 8.5/10

Spelling: 10/10

Personal Enjoyment: 10/10

Overall: I did notice some grammar errors not too many but I'd recommend checking that out seeing if you can't find them. I'd check for an editor or check out Quillbot! I fell in love with this story immediately.