Book name: Wonderverse

Writer: Unknownverse123

Reviewer: BookLoverVenue

Cover: 8/10

The cover had a nice picture, no doubt however it's typography section was not that prominent. You star images were taking up too much spaces and also had a lot of colours in it drawing the maximum attention of the viewer and in its process, the text is lost somewhere. In other words, the balance and contrast was the thing which was wrong in the cover.

Title: 9/10

The connection to your title was found right away when I read the blurb. It clearly explained what Wonderverse is and which is a good thing, to be honest. However, I wonder, why you named it Wonderverse since its Wonder+Universe. I am a curious being, ignore if I'm being annoying. Anyway, it was creative and different.

Blurb: 9/10

Your blurb was nice. Definitely attention grabbing and very nicely pulled off. I loved the quotes of G.O.D. However, I did think that it was a bit long distracting us from the main topic. You needn't write the 'Will They's perhaps or maybe remove the last paragraph. It's totally your choice. Thing is that whenI read the blurb, it was a whole complete thing. It felt a bit cut off.

Sensory detailing: 7/10

While reading the book, I could figure that you were trying to describe everything point by point. You were trying to make us flow with excitement. However, it wasn't the case. This can only be achieved if you explain what the narrator was feeling. FEELING. You were just informing us what she was thinking which arises the matter 'Don't tell but show.' And how should you show a a scene? But describing her feelings. And how should you describe her feelings? By using the 5 sense organs and explaining those scene. Namely, vision, smell, touch, hear and taste.

Settings: 8/10

This place was lacking as well. You did say how the places look but they were very short honestly. I couldn't see it before my eyes. I couldn't feel where we exactly were. Yes, it was still working to be honest, but you can always get better at it. Try to picture a scene and then write down whatever you are watching or feeling.

Character Development: 9/10

This place was a blaster. I know exactly what kind of a character your protagonist, Rosetta is. She is headstrong, strong-willed and ambitious. She was also very helpful and insecure in places. I do know about her brother as well. He is protective. About, Shirayuki, she is funny, a bit immatured sometimes but still a lovable character. So yeah, good job up till now. I wish to see the same result in other characters as well.

Spelling and grammar: 10/10

I did find quite a few mistakes which can be corrected if you proofread it. You can also used a writer if you wish but honestly, I think a thorough revision would do.

Plot: 14/15

Plot was very creative and different. It has some dark corners yet to be revealed as well making the reading more pleasurable. I loved the different powers which were not exaggerated and also the advanced technology. You also balances it with the old technology with Ayurveda. As in, New and old go together. The subtle metaphors were truly amazing. It is even taking nice twists and turns most importantly the problem, the city is facing and of course, there's the masked guy.

Overall Impression: 12/15

To be honest, the book has a lot of potential and I loved how you pulled it off. However, I must say that I did not like the 'Flashback's and 'Timeskip's. Professional books doesn't have it. They are honesty as if bringing the readers back to their chair than the fantasy world they were in. Replace them with 'An hour later' or 'After some time'. You can even divide the chapter by using. Page divider without making the readers come back. Also, I loved the vocabulary you used. In truth, the book is amazing, you just have to work a bit more on it to make it rock!

Marks achieved: 86