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REVIEW 40 - KABHI AANA TU MERI GAALI

Author: daydreamingatnight19

Reviewer: SavySagittarius

Title: 10/10

For a Hindi book, the title is really good. It's romantic and soothing. It goes well and perfectly with your story too.

Cover: 5/10

The cover picture is nice but the title gets cut as you can see. It can be easily skipped by readers who are looking for a brilliant story. Try to fit the title and choose a more soothing font, the glow isn't matching either. You also missed the author's name/username. You add your username if you don't like your name to be disclosed.

Blurb: 6/10

I love how starts with the question but it becomes kind of boring with not much insight, add a mysterious effect and another para graph maybe. That will make it perfect.

Sensory Detail: 10/10

I saw and felt the emotions, trust me, I am not even lying. To be honest, this book has better sensory details than other of your books. No offense, but I swear. Very good!

Settings: 10/10

You ACED EVERY SETTING! IT TOOK ME BACK ON TIMES, NOSTALGIA I SAY NOSTALGIA. My mom would love your book to be honest. Good buddy.

Character Development: 10/10

I am speechless. The characters were unique and nicely done. Nothing more, nothing less. Just amazing!

Plot: 15/15

The plot was impressive and unique. You had me hooked through the chapters and it's been amazing to read Hindi again.

Grammar: 10/10

Well, I suck in Hindi grammar.  So if I compare my essays with yours, you are perfect. I didn't find any mistakes though I re-read the parts 2-3 times, so looks like you aced it.

Overall: 15/15

I love your story and I am looking forward to reading more and seeing how it ends. You can edit it as I said later or even now, but do it for sure. All the best! 

Total: 91/100

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