Writer: SpongBobSquidless

Reviewer: theofficialmariE7

Title: 7/10

The title is good for the story, it clearly summarizes the whole point of it. Although the word 'spy' is commonly used on Wattpad adding reverse to it made it more unique, I would say but it sounded kind of cliche.

Cover: 5/10

To start with I didn't understand the cover it was way too dark and the many colors added are just too bad. It doesn't match the concept either I would rather you give it a more action or thriller vibe. Certainly saying, the placements of the text are good but I didn't see your username or a pen name. If you want your followers or readers to know it's you, you should add your username to the cover too.

Sensory Details: 8/10

I would love to hand this to you, I really felt Taylor's emotions as you narrated in the first person. I love how dedicated and committed Taylor is. She's a total badass and I do love it.

Blurb: 6/10

Your blurb wasn't too good, I would suggest you write in the third person so the descriptions and idea of the book would be clearer and easier to visualize. Not lie to it was after I read the first chapter I understood the blurb, please don't mind my jumbled up head. You did reveal much concerning your book and I think it would surely attract the right audience if you take away the emojis to make it look more formal and professional.

Setting: 5/10

Your descriptions aren't down to earth it's as though you leave me hanging, I couldn't picture the image of when she walked into the traitor's office and shot him dead. Your characters are utterly relatable but not knowing how your main character looks, I can't visualize her.

Character development: 6/10

Sorry if I sound rude, but Taylor's character doesn't seem real. I recall her killing her father cold-heartedly and watch her mother die too, did she possibly choose her parents overwork? I don't think her character is real, in my own opinion I can't even dare look my dad in the eye when he is serious talk more of killing him. I'm aware she loves soup but not clear on her dislikes. Most times I just want to slap her then applaud her. Your Mc's awesome I admit just be more real in order for your readers to relate well with her.

Plot: 12/15

The plot was nice but the pace was a little too fast, I would rather you slow down a bit so you don't confuse your readers. Your story is a piece of art, action, and thriller. I love it though, I am not a big fan of either genre. I would surely read more to find out the ending, be ready for my humble visit.

Grammar and spelling mistakes: 7/10

They are many spelling and grammar mistakes that I believe could be easily corrected if you proofread through.

Overall impression: 12/15

Like I said not a big fan of action and thriller. I enjoyed yours, leaving out Taylor's mood she has been through a lot after her parents Betrayal and she suffered a lot for it. Also, I don't think adding the part where she has depression, which is likely to be suffered after the massive hit and cutting herself. Unless you want to give the impression that your story isn't a thriller or action-packed either rather it's an awareness story we're as Liam helps her to overcome her depression. No need to change the story since it's my opinion just make a few adjusts.

Total: 68/100

Reviewer's note:

Your writing skills are unique and creative. Widely spread and splendid. It is beautiful and please do keep on writing. Apologies for I said anything hurtful. I'm truly sorry but you asked for an honest review and you got it. Stay safe and blessed.