Author: daydreamingatnight19

Reviewer: savysagittarius

Title: 8/10

I think the title is ok as it goes well with the story though it's not exactly attractive.

Cover: 5/10

The cover is not fine, No title, author's name, doesn't match with the story at all. You could keep two characters facing opposite sides to enhance the "ajnabi" effect.

Blurb: 5.5/10

Extremely short, the blurb is supposed to give a glimpse of the story, in short, you just wrote a line of it which doesn't give any glimpse, Add a few character descriptions instead to make it a bit longer if you don't know what to write.

Settings: 8/10

Though you're opening chapter has pretty good settings, it gradually decreased, make sure to give good settings in order to make it easier for imagination.

Sensory details: 3.5/10

Your characters need more emotional display, I could not understand or attach to the character which is a minus point, give them emotions, make it in a way that readers feel them every cell of their body.

Character development: 10/10

The characters were well developed, especially the female protagonist, she had a good description bout herself and it enhanced her more. Good job!

Plot: 10/15

The plot is well developed as per 6 chapters, I can't really say in detail about it cause, 6 chapters is not quite enough to determine it.

Grammar: 10/10

For a Hindi language book, the grammar was really good with good Hindi vocabulary and grammar, which is not easy. Good job here!

Overall: 10/15

It was a good book, but as I said, it needs improvement, it is never too late, you wrote only 6 chapters so edit them, enhance them. you will do great

Total:75/100

Grade: C-