Author :- Rusty_Blogger0912

Reviewer:- SavySagittarius

Title:- 10/10

This title is working well. It's not common and catchy. I also like how perfectly the characters fit in the story. Great story!

Cover:- 10/10

I personally loved the cover. Fonts are good just make it more attention seeking. Everything else is greatgreat!

Blurb:- 10/10

I like it. I love the starting of the blurb, it was great. I also like how you added the thrill in the blurb. Good job!

Sensory Details:- 8/10

This story has a uniqueness in itself. I agree the sensory detail lacked a little and some events didn't touch heart as it should have but the book was good. Think of the feelings as if you are going through it. Or something that can make the reader feel it.

Setting:- 9/10

You did a good job at describing the scenarios. I reduced one point as at some places you missed the details you gave to others.

Character development:- 7/10

To be honest, I love your characters.  Now the issue arises with the character building. They just don't seem real. Your characters have goals but it seems as if they are confused. You have to give inner conflicts too. They are just too simple to be real.

Plot:- 12/15

Plot was amazing. You need to control your pace though. At some points it's slow and other it's fast. Keep the flow constant and everything will be perfect.

Grammar:- 14/15

No errors other than typos. Good job!

Overall:- 11/15

It was fun reading. Just edit it and keep the above points in mind while editing. You have a great potential in yourself. All the best.

TOTAL:- 91/100