Author:- Anastaciawolf

Reviewer:- SavySagittarius

Title:- 10/10

Accurate title. I got hooked at the cover and title. It's catchy and fits the story perfectly, Good job!

Cover:- 10/10

I love it, the fonts are perfect and everything is great! Good job in this one.

Blurb:- 10/10

I love it! Again it had me hooked. Anyone would read the book after reading the blurb it's so nice.

Sensory Details:- 9/10

It was pretty good. Like eclipse's emotions were the best described as per me. Everything was well planned but at few places the emotions of other characters went down. It can be edited.

Settings:- 10/10

You were perfect with the settings. Each and every scenario was very well described. Good job!

Character Development:- 8/10

I adore eclipse! She is relatable and many places her actions were similar to mine. Overall, her character was well developed.

You worked on other characters well too but at some places they got a bit weird. Like not realistic and relatable. You could do better with body language. Something which will bring them to life and be realistic. Just a little.

Plot:- 13/15

The story was good but you changed scenes so frequently that at places I got confused. This is the main reason for the cut of points. Trust me, the story is amazing but you need to arrange them better, alright?

Grammar:- 8/10

Very few errors in tenses mainly. Can be edited. Just re check once.

Overall:- 14/15

I enjoyed it. It was amazing just the plot, character, grammar should we taken care of and if done you're gonna rock. All the best.

Total:- 92/100