Author: Mila_333

Reviewer: sanghmitra1111

Title: 9/10

The title will attract any reader that loves reading a billionaire romance story. There is no problem here.

Cover: 9.5/10

The cover is perfectly relatable to the plot and matches the mood, concept, and theme of the book. No problem here either.

Details: 9/10

There is definitely no problem here as the book was full of it. It was well-detailed and the things were clear. However, at the initial stages, I would advise you to keep things concise. It may look unnecessarily long to some readers.

Blurb: 9/10

Your blurb has all the elements that are needed. It introduces your characters as well as the situation they have gotten themselves into (at first). It is nearly perfect. I would advise you to cut short the part " Meet Aiden Corrister" Or " Meet Lisa Hanston". Just write their names and their introduction in one paragraph. It will be even better. Also when I read the book there were more things going on with the plot. I hope you dedicate a line or two insinuating that, or you can just leave it as it is. Entirely your choice. The Blurb is good and the other things can serve as a surprise element.

Setting: 10/10

The setting of the book was wonderful! Every place whether it was the MC's home or the beach house was detailed well. You have done an awesome job providing all the details! Good job!

Character Development: 9/10

The characters were designed well and their actions and responses were clear. I liked the way you switched the povs and wrote accordingly. The fact that you have used french (and its translation) when the dialogues of Henry were spoken adds points to this! But I think it can be polished even more. Also, I hoped to see more of Lisa's parents in the story.

Plot: 13.5/15

The plot was really engaging, no doubt about that. It was really interesting that this book was not about a billionaire love triangle where Lisa keeps dodging two guys in her life and they fight over her. With the accident, amnesia, and Dia it was more interesting and new! There were also things like Lisa with her family (except just Nicole) or less to no involvement of Bryan later on in the story that disappoints me a little. But I hope you make more room for characters like them in the later projects. Also, it will be very helpful if you add a romantic 'all's well that ends well' epilogue to the story. It will be perfect to wrap up the story with a nice bow.

Grammar and Spelling mistakes: 8/10

There weren't any grammatical errors that I found. Spelling mistakes were also minimal. What was wrong was the way you wrote things in the initial stages of the book. The Vocabulary needs an update. I think your book will be even more impactful to the readers if you use more refined and advanced vocabulary. It adds more quality to the work.

Overall Impression: 13/15

I liked this book and its twist and turns. You gave an amazing description of Lisa's work (with all the Makeup and modeling details) and the overall setting and idea of it. The fact that this was not just an over-possessive billionaire love triangle but so much more makes this book unique.

But there were things that needed some changes. Like the writing style needs to be polished. It's Okay! We all start somewhere and it is a quality that develops over time and practice. So you need to keep writing and exploring new ideas to get to that stage. Just making the text more concise, with good vocabulary and proper involvement of all needed characters. It can make a vast difference in its quality. Keep writing!!!

TOTAL: 90/100

GRADE: B+