Author:- -gorgeously-valerie

Reviewer:- SavySagittarius

Title:- 10/10

The title is good and valid as it clearly showcases your story. It suits your story and personally, I don't think any other title could represent your story so well :)

Cover: 8/10

The cover was okay but not attractive enough to grab a reader's attention to such a amazing book written. I personally think you could be more creative with the cover. The authors name should be bigger so that they know who wrote it, it's so tiny. Though I loved the way you wrote your story name. It was good but a bit more editing will make it better.

Sensory detail: 10/10

The feelings and the enthusiasm was felt. Very strongly. It makes me feel the narrator so well. The mood as well was perfectly clear.

Blurb:- 10/10

The blurb is amazing! It's mysterious and thrilling at the same time, enough to make a reader excited to think what's inside it! Good job!

Sensory Detail:- 8/10

The description of various places the characters visited was good but not upto the mark. I had a bit difficulty in imagining. Considering your book is a fantasy genre, and every place or event is fantasy, you need to add evey piece of information on the surrounding for better imagination, I hope your getting my point.

Character Development: 10/10

Damn author! You nailed it! Even the fictional characters looked so real, it was amazing. I can't find any flaws whatsoever so I won't write much here too.

Plot: 15/15

I swear I haven't read anything like this before. Your storyline is just WOW! The way you designed everything was commendable. I could clearly relate to their emotions.

Talking about twist, every chapter contains a new twist which was really exciting to read as a reader and the fact that all the characters were so mysterious made it better, not to forget all the secrets they hid within themselves which added double excitement.

Grammar and Spelling:- 7.5/10

There was nothing in particular that caught my eye, just some random little mistakes here and there, which every writer has and which can be corrected when edited. I would want you to thoroughly go through the punctuation marks, it's important believe it or not. Other than that it seemed fine.

Overall:- 14/15

I got so obsessed with your story! It was amazing. Apart from all the flaws I marked your story writing was perfect. I swear, it was amazing. Keep writing good stories. All the best for future. Feel free to pm for any queries. Thank you.

Total:- 92.5/100