Author : ShikaDreamer108

Reviewer: SavySagittarius

Title: 10/10

OH. MY. GOD! I love it! It's a new type! I haven't seen such a title before. I mean, it's interesting in itself. It has a hidden meaning to it.

Cover: 9.5/10

I have no complaints about it. I don't know about others but I found it very pleasing. Your cover is just as beautiful as your title.

Sensory Detail: 10/10

Fabulous, the way you described all the emotions of jemimeh was awesome. It perfectly resembles a teenage mind.

Blurb: 9.5/10

I admit your description was interesting but I would suggest, try making it longer because as far as I have seen, readers look for a glimpse into the story. Adding few dialogue from the story can make it more expressible.

Settings: 9.5/10

I really liked the way you set everything, which was quite imaginable and relative. That's all I want to say in this section.

Character Development: 9.5/10

It was amazing but I cut the half marks cause I feel, you should add more details to their personality.

Plot: 15/15

Your story is one of a kind. It's new, so I found the storyline far more than amazing. I love the way you keep cliffhangers. It builds up excitement and hooks the readers to the story.

Grammar: 8.5/10

Your writing skills and grammar was really commendable. Your writing and grammar both were enhanced. Though you missed punctuations at few places. Readers may not really notice it but being a reviewer it's my job to point it out. You can also keep comas instead of full stops at few sentences. Try shortening your paragraphs a little more. Other than that, it's amazing.

Overall: 13/15

Your score tells it all. Your story is amazing. I was personally very excited after reading the chapter one itself. Just correct the above mentioned errors and everything will be perfect. I hope this helped you. All the best! Keep writing.

Total: 94.5/100