REVIEW 25 - VALENCE
Author: Aarya2103
Reviewer: SavySagittarius
Title: 10/10
Wow, your title is just wow! I wanted to read your book just by seeing your title. It's so unique. You have a great quality because I personally suck at titles and roam around friends for ideas. Good job!
Cover: 9.5/10
I admit your cover is very beautiful. The fonts are impressive, specially the font of the title. Also, it blends so well with Your plot.
Sensory detail: 10/10
Fabulous. I love the first chapter, the vocabulary and the way you expressed the feelings of losing parents was so good that I could relate. It may sound weird but that chapter actually made me cry. Great job!
Blurb: 10/10
Your description length was perfect and also good enough to Build excitement in a reader. It was beautiful in all ways.
Setting: 9.5/10
Setting of the scenes were good too. The way you described the mirror and the world beyond it was really interesting.
Character development: 10/10
How are you so perfect? I really don't have words to express. It was amazing, that's all, the scores says it all.
Plot: 15/15
Your story line and plot twist was amazing! It's something unique. I never read this kind of book before. Very well done 👍
Grammar: 9/10
Well, your writing and grammar skills were pretty much enhancing. Though, I did find few tenses change here and there, you can edit them later.
Overall: 13.5/15
I guess this is the shortest review of the syntax, lol. Anyway, your book was amazing! Just re read to check the tenses and edit them later. I hope this review helped. Keep writing, best of luck.
Total: 96.5/100
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