Author: rememberiwasvapour 

Reviewer: Victory_in_Winters13

 Title: 10/10 

Your title was quite unique, fascinating, and interesting to me to see what lies in the book for the readers to watch. Actually, I was pretty interested to see how metaphorically the sky will absorb humans or species that live on the planet. Your title did give me the urge to move on to learn what would happen in the story. 

 Cover: 10/10

WHOA!!!!! The moment I looked in the cover, I must say I was speechless. No words can cover the intensity you managed to cover your book in. I was absolutely pleased with the colors that popped mystery and foreshadowing as to what would happen next. The mood of the book along with the fonts and pictures was perfect in every sense and it was aesthetically pleasing to see.

Sensory Details: 10/10

I was absolutely stunned by the amount of time you must have spent on re-editing your book which rarely authors would do. You had described the moods, feelings expressed of the protagonist to the minute detail which really impressed me to look forward to what would be happening next and also the situation that is currently occurring. You have actually done an amazing job!!!

Blurb: 10/10

Your blurb was something I actually began to leaf through your book. You have done a great job here because you maintained the enigmatic atmosphere which actually prods the reader to look into your book. I loved how precise was the blurb yet it delivered everything that you wanted it to be shown in the book. Great job in bringing a good and precise blurb which was equally fascinating

Setting: 9.5/10

The descriptions of the places were actually amazing with your detailed descriptions to the minute detail. I loved the way you showed the majestic campus and also the center where your character has interaction with others but I still feel that a bit more setting vibe was left. 

 Character Development: 10/10

MARVELLOUS!!!!ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!!!HATS OFF TO YOU!!!! These were the words that literally screamed in me when I read Vincent's whole character sketch along with Orion and Holst.Being near to the end of the world,you made Triggs such a heartwarming character despite having a past,cares for the world and the emotions,phew!!They literally gave me chills which is pretty unusual for me because never had I went deep into such emotions.I actually appreciated the way you brought up Triggs,Holst and Orion's personality showing various emotions of freedom,fear,help,empathy and many more.I actually appreciated it

Plot: 12/15

I was very amused with the plot you brought up with and was actually going good with the flow until I noticed there were a few minor plot holes in it.I think in chapter 4,in one paragraph you stated that Triggs was alone and automatically you shifted to Orion and Holst supporting him.I could not decipher how they all came along that suddenly which I felt that you should explain how all three met together.Secondly,you have an ongoing book so little glimpses were given into Triggs' past which was not even seen after chapter 7.Lastly,I found that you could have added aesthetics which are kind of onset to how the person is and also give us a map drawing of the places you mentioned where we could figure out where is this novel really going on.There are few applications which can help you in that too.Also,not everyone is well acquainted with some philosophical words like a hymn from Rigveda which was not properly given a reference.I would say I found your book really interesting but I actually feel that adding these comments in consideration would appeal the reader to go forward.

Grammar and Spelling mistakes: 9/10

You proofread your book and maintained all the tenses which is a wonderful job but despite that, I saw some silly minor spelling mistakes in one of the four chapters.

Overall Impression: 14/15

When you mentioned that you were confused about your genres I would actually be the first one to say it is indeed a wonderful fusion of fantasy,philosophy,psychology,science fiction and general fiction.Although the first seven chapters did gave me the vibe,but I feel it is more lenient towards science fiction because you went in and was able to explore many things due to science so I felt that genre was one point to be majorly there.About the book,I could not find much flaws in it because I got to know that you included reviews from previous reviewers which is great and also it relieved me the pressure to actually judge with a detective's eye although I still managed to catch some although as a reader I would have avoided it.Also,I did take time to find out flaws because you were nearly perfect but I guess few improvements can make it better. I loved your character descriptions which did help in increase of scores and also maintaining the optimistic side of the story which I loved it.I believe I had pointed out the possible flaws mentioned to you and KEEP WRITING!!!!! Good luck!!! 

 TOTAL : 95/100

Grade:A+