Author: arabian_knights

Reviewer: Anonymous

TITLE: 10/10

At the point, simple, straight forward. Just amazing. Nothing wrong, and it's attractive to readers who usually look for things like 'word of the day' or 'Thought for the day'. Well done!

COVER: 9.5/10

Cover is absolutely amazing, but one thing just mention the author's name whenever you have time to edit it. Your picture is absolutely at the point and the quote below is also to the point, impressive!

SENSORY DETAILS: 10/10

I have read 6 chapters since you update everyday, Out of all I think I will give my opinion based on the first story of yours, since that one touched me a lot.

It was heartwarming. Honestly, it was so real and the book is described so beautifully it was nostalgic. I like the way you have a realistic approach to your stories without introducing anything out of ordinary.

'CARPE DIEM' will probably leave a long lasting footprint on me. Honestly. By the way I will read one chapter of yours daily, your books make a positive impact on an individual. Great job!

BLURB: 10/10

Nothing wrong, to the point and summarises everything. Your motivation, your source, your goal. It's perfectly fine.

SETTING: 10/10

Since it shifts from prose to poem, I scored you based on the first two prose you wrote. The setting is perfectly fine, I can literally imagine everything in my head, as if I am the lead character over there. Especially the shirt story (Second chapter), it was absolutely mind blowing.

Your setting is realistic, you provided pictures to imagine it clearly. You are good to go!

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 10/10

Again, based on the first and second story I am giving the score. It's fine, I have nothing to say in this field. All details about the character are mentioned properly. Flawless.

PLOT: 15/15

Based on first and second chapter, it's realistic and induced a valuable morale. I mean, it teaches us some good values, I like it. And the characters and the story is pretty relatable too. Not to say it's hundred percent unique, but they are amazing.

Grammar: 10/10

You did good. A vast range of vocabulary is used and grammar is flawless. I can see you already achieving your goal to improve your writing skill. Well done.

Overall: 15/15

Honestly, if you had just mentioned author's name in the cover, your story could have got a straight 100/100. It was really good. I read all the chapters, but I carefully read the first four since its a collection.

Your writing style is magnificent. I am happy to see an author who is trying to induce some moral values and motivation in our life. I am obliged to do your review.

TOTAL: 99.5/100

Thank you for writing such an amazing work of art and giving me a chance to review it. I am honoured. All the best!!