Writer: earlfangs

Reviewer: sanghmitra1111

Title: (10/10) 

There is no problem with the title. Aragons is a pretty neat name if you ask me. 

 Cover: (10/10)

The cover is beautiful! It is perfect and totally relevant to the book, with purple effects and (supposedly) Raia's sword. 

 Blurb: (8/10) 

I would say the blurb is Okay. It is interesting and provides information but I guess you can change the use of words. Mold the words into something mysterious and mind-grabbing. Something that will make the readers go through the book and know more. What you have seems like a short answer to a question asked. So I advise you to change the way you wrote it.

 Sensory details-(9.5/10) 

The sensory details were Great! Especially in the coachman chapter. You have shown the behaviors and mannerisms of the characters well, but everything has mystery, especially with Raia being on guard and quiet about everything. 

 Setting: (10/10) 

Reading your work gives me the anime vibes. I have said this thing again and again. So according to this, the setting is amazing! Especially the way you describe them both in normal scenes and action scenes, they seem to be going perfectly along with the plot.

Plot: 14/15

The opening is very hyping! Especially the trailer you put at the start. Wonderful! It is a fun ride, with an action-packed (a little mysterious) adventure! Your story is very interesting to read. Honestly, it gives me the anime vibes. There are many things to wrap our head around and understand but as we proceed in the story, the things become more clear. Personally, I absolutely loved the way you wrote the action scenes. They stretch out but don't bore us. It keeps us hooked to know more about it. You have kept the language simple so it is very fun to read. The writing style is very easy to read. The way you have changed them according to the situation is also commendable. You see, sometimes a writer writes more on an emotional scale. So when the intensity of an action scene comes, they are unable to describe them perfectly and vice-versa. You have an awesome balance of both. It is simple, so it is easily read by others. But if you want to improve your writing style and make it more professional, you can use an advanced set of vocabulary. But what you have right now, is also good. Hats off to your imagination! It was a fun ride. There were some places where too much info was dropped on the readers, (when the story started) but slowly things started clearing and became more understandable. Overall it's good. 

 Characters development: (10/10) 

 Your characters are on spot, no doubt about that. The duo of Raiden and Nanthan are also fun to read! And the inner battles and dilemma Raia has occasionally. It's Great you have wonderfully shown the stark contrast of every character. Good job!

Grammar/Vocabulary: (10/10) 

I didn't find any grammatical or Vocabulary mistakes while reading. That's a great thing! Keep it up! 

 Overall impression: (14/15) 

WoW! This was a fun read. I can even imagine it being an anime series. There were few concepts that were not so new, but new terms and other things can make it different. And it is already unique! I really loved the way you wrote action scenes! The concept is wonderful, but you shouldn't be afraid to make it even better if you want to! Even though it was a good read, it can be an even better one! Keep writing, keep improving! What you have is amazing! But accessing your work makes me think you can do even better! Keep up the Great work!! 

 TOTAL= 95.5/100