Author: Raven_Burns

Reviewer: SavySagittarius

Title: 10/10

The title is so accurate for your story like it's the perfect title. It has its own uniqueness in it which makes it looks more awesome. 

Cover: 10/10

Okay, just look at it. It beautiful, perfect, outstanding in itself. I personally loved the cover. It has everything needed to give a glimpse of the story. I don't know if it is taken from the internet or not but I love the foreign language letter below the title. 

Sensory detail: 10/10

I loved the way you described every moment and emotion faced/ felt by your characters. Even though it was fantasy, it felt real, which was fantastic. 

Blurb: 9/10

To be honest, I would give you full marks if you added more points to your blurb. Rather than just writing a para of glance you can add a dialogue adding a mysterious effect to it. Readers will jump right in then.

Settings: 10/10

Again the setting was awesome. The places and the way you described it, the actions, everything was awesome. You did a great job with the setting, I could literally envision them in front of me that what would happen. 

Character development: 9/10

Everything here was fine except the description of the character's looks. You have to add more points in order to help readers imagine their faces better. Their outfit and personalities were good and imaginable but the looks were something you need to work on.

Plot: 10/10

No matter how many times I read your book, it not going to get boring. It has so much fun and interest that it's tough to keep it down. I swear, it is awesome. The way you described everything was mindblowing and even the twists, each and every twist is go not expected that it made me frown thinking on where did this come from? Just awesome.

Grammar: 10/10

Now that is something which is an achievement. Getting 10/10 in grammar is a great deal in my point of view and you aced it. I literally read every para twice to find mistakes but No mistakes at all. Not that I found any. As per me, this is perfection.

Overall: 14/15

I have no words, It was awesome reading your book, only the blurb and character description is something you have to edit and then your book will be a masterpiece. Keep writing! All the best! 

Total: 92/100