Writer: FizaKhan3

Reviewer: SavySagittarius

Title: 10/10

It is good and extremely cute. 'My Penchant', the meaning and the way it contrasts with the story is perfect. Very well done!

Cover: 7/10

To be honest, the cover is cute but not the best for the story. Considering Edward to be a doctor, I guess a pic with a doctor with his lady love would be better. It's not that you have to change it but I would suggest keeping something like that which can match your story. You will get plenty of pics like that on the internet.

Sensory Detail: 10/10

Great job! I mean the emotions felt by the characters were so realistic and imaginative that I could feel myself getting excited at some point in scenes. I especially loved the chapter 'My Past' the way Kristin felt after the nightmare and the jealousy when she saw Edward with Granger was so well described. 

Blurb: 8/10

The length was good, the way you wrote was good too. One good thing was that you didn't give a lot and kept a mysterious effect to it, which might make the readers want to read to find out more about your story. Good job! The only thing, due to which I had to cut marks was your punctuation and grammar in the blurb. You need to recheck and edit it. Otherwise, it's perfect.

Setting: 10/10

Perfect! The way you described the scenarios was really good. I especially loved the fact that you kept both the protagonist's POV. I know it's not a new thing but not many keep both povs. So good job!

Character Development: 7/10

You need to improve Character development. You did give a description of the character's outfit and a few of their traits but no details on her appearance which makes it tough to imagine them. So, look over it once.

Plot: 14/15

Well, I loved your storyline. It was great and different. The way you designed your plot was commendable! I liked the bomb of twists you bombarded was fabulous! Even the cliffhangers were pretty good too. Amazing work! 

Grammar and Spelling Mistakes: 8/10

Now now, this is what I was waiting for. You have to improve your grammar. Though there weren't severe mistakes, you did do spelling mistakes here and there. Many may ignore it while many may not. So, you better go through. You also should check your tenses. You shifted tenses many places. So, check that too!

Overall Impression: 15/15

You are an awesome author and I can see it. Don't be dishearted by grammar or others, I was worse. I highly recommend this book. Just improve the places I pointed and your story will be all ready to shine! You just need to edit those parts and polish your cover! That's all! All the best!

Total: 89/100