Oneshots/Short stories results!
So, we've finally got one shots results and we're so happy as we're coming to an end to this awards. This was the category which we all had been waiting for and it's been long enough to give out the results. We're extremely sorry for giving out the results of this particular category really late. We were busy with our studies and exam preparations. Anyways, here's the result.
MAKE SURE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. I WORKED REALLY HARD ON IT.
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AND THE NOMINEES ARE :::
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Butterflys_effect :: That Mystical Night
123Lolly_tae :: Blessed
Mrs_Namnam :: Glamping Gone Wrong
-Yoonshooky :: Strung together
MochisaysLachimolala :: I'm Fine
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AND THE WINNER IS....
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That Mystical ight by Butterflys_effect
Congratulations on winning first place!
Judge: jungkookiezee
Cover: 5
Title: 5
Blurb: 10
Plot: 20
Grammar and vocabulary: 19.5
Writing style and creativity: 14
Characters and emotions: 15
Judges opinion: 10
Total: 98.5 From the cover to the blurb to the plot everything is perfect. The story is really great and it's well written. There's no grammatical mistakes. I loved it.
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2nd place
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I'M FINE by MochisaysLachimolala
Congratulations on winning second place!
Judge: Gonewiththewind03
COVER: 4/5 It's a beautiful cover. But not quite fond of the two edged/coloured font at the bottom. Personally not my fav.
TITLE: 4/5 The title fits perfectly. I'm fine is the most used phrase in our daily lives, and with this story it explored the new outcomes of the same.
BLURB: 9/10 It's short and simple. Just the way it must be. Plus the oneshot really is self explanatory on its own.
PLOT: 19/20 It was a great plot. A simple everyday life without much exaggerations. A view, a glimpse into the life of Jungkook was my favourite. It piques interest with the loose endings present.
GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY: 20/20 There ain't a single mistake to be pointed out.
WRITING STYLE: 15/15 The writing style is pretty clean. The way it progresses sure makes you know more. Good going!
CHARACTERS AND EMOTIONS: 14/15 Jungkook was the main character, and I believe it was beautifully written. The struggles of a normal life to end meets, harsh treatment, emotional attachment was perfect.
JUDGING STYLE: 9/10 I loved the story. I adore the way how a pretty normal plotline was put into something eye-pleasing. I get the feels of "For you" MV, which was also my fav in the older days of Bangtan. Continue writing well, Zoya!!
Total: 94/100
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3rd place:
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GLAMPING GONE WRONG by Mrs_Namnam
Congratulations on winning third place!
Judge: Gonewiththewind03
COVER: 4/5 The cover seems to be a simple photo of the BTS boys. But the extra effects at the edges and the fonts used make up for it. Though, given its about a vacation, I would suggest a greener and brighter pic, but this goes well too!
TITLE: 5/5 The title fits perfectly. There seems to be no problem in that.
BLURB: 9/10 The description makes you curious to know the events in the book and that's a big plus point. You could add a sentence othr than dialogue ofcourse to make it even better.
PLOT: 20/20 This is the first time in a while, that I've given perfect score for plot. It excites you and makes the whole story interesting. From the start to the end, I didn't get to notice a plot hole in any way. Especially, with all the comedy in it.
GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY: 20/20 Surprisingly, there's not a single mistake to be spotted either. It seems like it's been thoroughly edited.
WRITING STYLE: 15/15 The writing style is really good, with the special titles for each chapter. There's not much to say here.
CHARACTERS AND EMOTIONS: 14/15 If I said, I didn't laugh, then that would be a huge mistake. Like the whole thing was kind of on crack, not offending anyone. But, from the anxious to the scared, I kinda felt the second hand embrassment as well. So, good job.
JUDGING STYLE: 10/10 I loved the story. You really do write good one shots. I suggest you to write more. Not just because, our boys as characters itself are chaotic, but also because you have a unique sense of humor. Nothing to improve actually, maybe some tweaks here and there. And the cover could be more fun.
Total: (92/100)
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BEST JUDGE OF THE ONESHOTS CATEGORY
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Congratulations!
Congrats to all the winners! You guys have done a great job!
The winners will get whatever is mentioned in the prizes by the next 24 hrs
Butterflys_effect please comment here on which book should we vote on.
MochisaysLachimolala please comment here on which book should we vote on.
Mrs_Namnam please comment here on which book should we vote on.
Participants will receive their certificates by the next 24 hours and judges will receive a certificate too by the next 24 hours.
Gonewiththewind03 please pm Ash_k00kie what you want from the list of prizes.
Thank you!
Saranghe!
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