JHS final results!
Okay, So we have now got just 2 more categories' results left and don't worry we will get them soon and finish this award book soon. We have been planning on another award and we can't wait till our boards are over. We really can't wait. Okay now back to the results!
AND THE NOMINEES ARE :-
Joonfuxke :: Two Dimensions
Aleena992 :: I Run
Mrs_Namnam :: Let Me Be Your Man
Mctheweirdo :: My Spirit
AMELIE1318 :: Like
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AND THE WINNER IS
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Aleena992 :: I Run
Congratulations on winning first place!!
Judge: firstRMsmoonchild
Cover: 4.5 Is it attractive? Very. Colors and fonts? Very asthetic and suitable. Is it related to the story? Yes.
Title: 5 Eye-catching? Yessss. Is it unique? Very. Is it related? Yes.
Blurb: 10 To long, to short or perfect? Perfect. Does it intrigue you to read it? It's very interesting portrait, which makes us wanna read it. Does it give away the whole plot? Not at all.
Plot: 20 Is it unique, creative or just plain? Very unique, never read a ff like this before. Too fast, too slow or perfect? Perfect for the story, can get a bit annoying because the pace changes constantly but that's the deal. Being annoying is what makes it so good. Are there plot twists? Yes. Are there plot holes? None that I noticed.
Grammar: 18 Are there any errors? Very few. Are there any shortcuts? No. Has proper punctuation been used? Yes. Did you come across any new words? Yes, throughout the book the author uses not-so-usual words to describe her characters. Was it simple or just perfect? Simply perfect (does repeat some common words)
Writing style and creativity: 15 How is the writing style? Very good, unique. Was it described well enough? Yes, the author has a very good choice of words and structure to make it very easy to understand. Are you able to understand the dialog? Yes, we always knew who was speaking. Does it make you read further? Definitely. Is it creative? Very suiting for the story and to read
Characters and emotions: 15 Are the characters interesting? Yes, we want to get to know more about them. Is there character development? Yes, very well written. How efficiently is the relationship evolving? Very good. Not wanting to spoil anything the main character goes through a realization. Are the characters' parts explains well? Yes. Are the emotions explained well? Very well yes. Are you able to feel the emotions? Yes, the author uses well suiting adjectives to describe them. Do you feel like you're in the story? Definitely.
Judges opinion: 10 Did you enjoy the book? Very much :)
Review: This book is very intriguing, probably something not so many have read before in the seating of fanfiction. The language not only is used greatly, it educates us about new words. The author does repeat some ordinary words but nothing that could stop us from reading. The plot twist is very well used at the end and throughout the book. The main character had a very beautiful development. In a nutshell everyone should give this book a try.
Points: 97.5
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2nd Place...
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Joonfuxke :: D: Two Dimensions
Congratulations on winning second place!!
Judge: nahthumin_97
Cover: 5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 18/20
Grammar and Vocabulary: 17/20
Writing style and creativity: 14/15
Characters and emotions: 13/15
Judges opinion: 10/10
Total: 91/100
To begin, I'd want to state that the story plot is fantastic and that there are no flaws in it. So, in terms of writing, please use a full stop at the conclusion of each sentence. Use proper punctuation and avoid writing the same thing twice. Try to elaborate on what you're trying to communicate and express your sentiments through writing so that the readers can grasp what's going on or what will happen next. Put anything between a second ago time and a time skip to let readers know that the time has skipped to another time. Separate the paragraphs and use two to four sentences in each one. if you want to improve your writing style, you can read famous authors' books and get an idea about it. Please be aware of plagiarism.
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3rd Place...
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Mrs_Namnam :: Let Me Be Your Man
Congratulations on winning third place!!
Judge: kingsofchaosbts
Cover- ~Yes it's simple and beautiful ~the colors are great and the font too but the font is glowing and just a little not clear seeing the font style ~Yes definitely it shows the streets of the city Seoul and the main character of the tale (4.5/5)
Title- ~Yes it is and romantic ~A bit?a pickup line like this is not that common and I liked it ~Yes it is definitely it describes the change in the main female character's life (5/5)
Blurb- ~Perfect a small amount of chapter but long parts inside each ~Yes it did ~It does the story is very interesting and it shows it perfectly (9.5/10)
Plot- ~Its creative to write as a book showing a girls life in a new place ~Nice steady speed ~A very nice amount ~No not really (18/20)
Grammar and Vocabulary- ~No ~no not really ~Yes it has been used ~A few ~It was medium and detail in a medium way (20/20)
Writing Style and Creativity- ~It has detail and simplicity ~Yes the author is able to keep it all consistent ~The dialogue were nicely done to be understanding ~Yes it makes me curious ~Yes it's nice to read (12/15)
Characters and Emotions- ~The characters and their personality both are great ~Yes there is and many characters opening put with every chapter ~It goes on how they are meant to be ~Yes they are explained ~Yes it really nicely discussed too ~Its magically good ~Yes it feels like being one of the side characters who just watches the story the whole time (13/15)
Judges Opinion- ~Yes I definitely did enjoy it ~I like how the female main character deals with her problems and rebuilds their life the other way and I would say they got points on their detail and good writing and the characters I would say they can try put more into the cover (8.5/10) TOTAL--- (90.5/100)
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BEST JUDGE OF THE JHS CATEGORY
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Congrats to all the winners! You guys have done a great job!
The winners will get whatever is mentioned in the prizes by the next 24 hrs
Aleena992 please comment here on which book should we vote on.
Joonfuxke please comment here on which book should we vote on.
Mrs_Namnam please comment here on which book should we vote on.
firstRMsmoonchild please pm Ash_k00kie what you want from the list of prizes.
Participants will receive their certificates by the next 24 hours and judges will receive a certificate too by the next 24 hours.
Thank you!
Saranghe!
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