This is the review of a book by @Spumonii named "Sucker."

1. Cover=24

Cover is above.

The cover is amazing to me. I am not a cover designer by any means, but this is skill and talent. I would pick up this book on my own free will. It intrigues me, and putting in the 3-D shapes in with the 2-D outlines is revolutionary.

2. Description+Tags=25

"𝐈'𝐦 𝐚 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐲𝐨𝐮"

Matilda Manchester isn't really a sucker for anything or anyone for that matter, except maybe lollipops. Cystic fibrosis might me tough, but Matilda is tougher. When she finds out a girl in her town doesn't have access to CF treatment, she is determined to help while also balancing friendship troubles, family drama, and a certain twinkling eyed boy that makes her heart flutter.

This is what I believe to be a good description. It's vague enough so I want to keep reading, yet it can keep me interested. 

All of the tags are relevant to the story, and like the description, they don't give anything away. I see fundraising is one, so I wonder what will happen?

3. Hook=24

"If there was anything Matilda hated more than mean people, it was fake people. Fake people like..."- Sucker by Rose R.

The hook drew me in. Ah, a fellow hater of fake people. I read on, and discovered the fakes in her school, her annoying, yet endearing sister, and her best friend who might be drifting away. It was an amazing story to read. It was exactly how I would imagine a book like that.

However, I usually don't give perfect scores, and I didn't give this one one either. It introduced humor

4. Conventions=23

The grammar was truly remarkable. There was only one mistake I observed. 

"One of the most amazing things about her town, Diamond Springs was the family owned..."- Sucker by Rose R.

There should be a comma after Diamond Springs. Other than that, the spelling was on point, and the writing amazing.

Overall score=96/100

I truly believe that Sucker has great potential for something better than Wattpad. It is beautifully written, and clear so I can understand it. Matilda with Cystic Fibrosis really adds a struggle to the plot. Overall, this was a pretty good read. It's amazing what people can do when they're stuck in quarantine.

*Not all reviews will be formatted like this. This story only had 1 chapter, not including the intro, at the time this was written.