Name of the book:Pretty Baby
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ame of the author: VanessaApekey
Number of Chapters I read: 10-12(I lost count since I really love the book)
Reviewed by: musings21

Title and cover
The cover of the book is really good and eye-pleasing but I'm not really sure why you have titled the book as 'Pretty Baby' Maybe there could be a reason to that but if there isn't then another mysterious title could've done more justice to your amazing book.

Grammar and vocabulary
The grammar and vocabulary of the book is on point and pretty good. There are no mistakes that I've noted till where I've read which makes it pretty easy to read. The tense and spelling are perfect.

Characters
Given that it's a mystery book, there's this perfect edge to every character you've involved in the book. It definately keeps me thinking about each and every character. I wonder what happened to eve or what is jewel upto and what happened to Alice and Eve's mother? Its all just a mystery.
Though I kind of did get confused when the POVs kept changing but once I got the grip of every character I did love reading them. Though a bit of more explanation about the characters would do more justice to the book since I feel that you should add more to them.

Plot
The plot is really lovely and satisfying. I absolutely loved reading the book. Ofcourse 'Then' and 'Now' parts of the book did kind of make me confused but that was okay since later I did undersrand why it was framed that way. The book definately kept me curious all the time. Good going with the plot.

Flow of the story
The flow is interesting enough to keep the readers hooked. After every chapter I craved to know what happens next. There were no chapters wherr I felt anything off.

Originality/Creativity
This book has a very original writing style, from describing every scene with perfection to making us understand the state of mind of each and every character is beautiful. I would definately want to know a but more though in every chapter.

Overall Note
• Increase the length of the chapters they seem a bit shorter.

•Ofcourse your descriptions are beautiful, but try to make  them a notch lesser since the descriptions seem to take up more space than needed in your chapter.

•Give the readers more insight on the characters in every chapter unless there is a reason behind keeping most about the characters.

• I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE BOOK AND RECOMMEND IT TO EVERYONE TO READ IT. THE BOOK DESERVES FOR READS THAN IT HAS, THIS BOOK IS A BEAUTY. I ASSURE THAT YOU WILL FALL IN LOVE WITH IT

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