My poetries-An insight |Reviewed by lia
Name of the book:My poetries-An insight
Name of the author:notsoaureate
Number of chapters I read:10
Reviewer: musings21
Cover:
The cover is good, neat and presentable but I feep that it does not depict the emotions of the wonderful poems you have written. Also I would suggest a change in the title.
Description:
You have some pretty good skills to describe a situation But I feel it lacks the depth a poem should have. Apart from that the poems are really descriptive and rhyme well. I love how easily you've rhymed with perfection. Also try putting some new words and use descriptive vocabulary. Play a little with the words.
Presentation:
The layout and stanzas of the poems are nice and readable. It is put up at it's best.
Originality:
Well the poems are good but they lack the uniqueness that a poem should have. Maybe if you try to think more on specific topics or try more to make your poems out of the box. Imagine!
Style/creativity:
well there wasn't anything that eye-catching except for your flawless rhyming skills. I prefer to tell you that you should deep dive into many other topics and read as many poems you can. Try out various prompts on wattpad. Look out for words and sentences on pinterest or maybe an image that may inspire you to write about many things.
Grammar and punctuation:
Your punctuation is on point. I did not find any mistakes regarding that but I did find a few words off in some places. I guess it did not fall well with the sentence structure. So I urge you to read your poems again.
Clarity of imagery and language:
your poems are excellent but I feel that you should try and be a bit more creative with them. Try to be unique, stand out of the crowd of poets that share a similiar style as yours. You are definately capable of painting heart wrenching poems.
Overall impression:
I'll say there's definantely more room for improvement. Sit and experiment with various formats of poetry and topics, try new things. You have a really good way of expressing yourself and your grammar is flawless. I wish you all the best, for sure you'll be a great poet in the near future.
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