Name of the book:Burning Roses
Number of chapters read: almost all
Name of the author:SummuB
Reviewer:musings21

Cover:
I feel you could make the cover more attractive. It does require a change. The title is pretty good.

Description:
I felt that the poems were pretty bland and too simple. There wasn't much of description except in a few places. You have tried to use metaphors but some how they don't fit right. I want you to be more descriptive with your words.

Presentation:
Every poem has a different presentation and that's alright. There was nothing wrong about it. Good going there.

Originality:
Well, the poems were okay but I would recommend you ti read more to enhance your vocabulary so that it would allow you to express your emotions perfectly.

Style/creativity:
The style was pretty normal nothing unique or out of the box. You do have good concepts but you need to leaen how to bring them out in a beautiful manner.

Grammar and punctuation:
The grammar was really spotless, there were mistakes with respect to spellings or any other grammatical mistake. I did find a few commas and full stops missing which you can correct once you go through the poems again.

Clarity of imagery and language:
The imagery is clear but it missed the emotional factor, such that the readers feel the depth of what you write.
Also try to find new words in your poems. You will find many on pinterest or google. Make a habit of reading different styles of poetry

Overall impression:
I did enjoy reading you poems because of the concept, but description and emotional factor wise I felt they lacked alot. I would recommend you to read poems on pinterest, a few good books on wattpad and instagram.

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