Thanks for giving me hope that I was a good writer Gwenon127 !!!

To give you some background
information on the story I gave up on so long ago. I made a story about a mermaid named kari who went through alot of hard times. Because of people all over the world. But because I ended the story I'm going to change up the story. This is about her kids a good 10 years after the clean up.

Hi I'm rosie and I'm 10 years old. I'm sure you know my mom's story . I mean she saved the world after all . This is a story about how i saved my mom.

" To slow rosie" my annoying big brother said as he laughed. " Jake don't make fun of your sister" mom snaped. "Yeah your slow too jake" dad said getting in the conversation. " I'm faster then you dad " jake said challengeing ( is that how you spell it)
Him . "Oh really my dad" said accepting his challenge "first one to the coral reefs wins ".

Ready

Set

Go

Jake swam as fast as he could but dad was as the humans say leaving him in the dust. When the race was over and jake got to the coral he was out of breath and tired

" how *pant* did *pant* you beat *pant* me " jake said out of breath . "It took you forever for you to come looks like your as the humans call it the slow poke" dad said "all right lets get back home your mother shoud be done with dinner by now".

By the time we got home the surface of the water was dark it was going to rain. That means waves lot and lots of big waves. When we want in we found our house is a mess and mom was on the couch dad rushed to her side. This is where my story starts.

And where this chapter ends cliffhanger i always wanted to do this bye