BOOKTITLE : Speed of light.

REVIEWER : TemptedHeart

AUTHOR : explodingdepression

GENRE: Teenfiction / Fantasy.

COVER: 7/10

The cover is descent and somewhat depicts what the book is about. I like the fact that there’s also a clock of somewhat in there that correlates with the title of the book. The font and colors used are good as they work great with the cover and character that is being used in the cover.

TITLE: 8/10

I love the title, it’s simple and unique in its own way. It also lets the readers know before hand what the book is about.

BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 6/10

The description is simple and straightforward. The use of words and description draws the reader’s attention and makes me want to know more.

PAGE LAYOUT (Paragraphs, Spacing, Lines, Order of sequence, Neatness): 3/10

Page layout is something most writers on Wattpad overlook and have a hard time working with. Paragraphs are of reasonable length but lack sequence. Spacing and order of the chapters is poor. Lines and neatness is also not so great as the words are just jumbled together and it makes it hard to keep track sometimes.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 5/10

I am going to be honest and tell you that I didn’t really understand much when reading your book. I knew it had something to do about racing and I later found out from my younger brother that your book is based off a game. Even then it was hard for me to understand it and so from the little I got I’m giving you a five for character development.

GRAMMAR/VOCABULARY/SPELLING: 6/10.

You made a lot of spelling and grammatical errors from your book description to the chapters itself. I advise that you get an editor to help you out with the grammar and arrangement of your chapters, that should help.

COMMUNICATION WITH READERS: 3/5

You don’t have a lot of comments yet as there are very few chapters in your book and I’m not sure how to grade a book that doesn’t have comments in it yet so I am giving you a three.

GENERAL SATISFACTION: 4/15

Like I said before, I didn’t really understand your book and it was hard for me to keep up with it and I didn’t really enjoy it because of that.

TOTAL: 42/80.

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