BOOKTITLE : Healing Melody

REVIEWER : -evphoric

AUTHOR : adelinewu2207 / Adeline Wu

GENRE: Romance/Chicklit

COVER : 9/10

I adore the cover for this book. It's simple, yet it gives off a romantic vibe, which is very well suited to your story.
I like that the font title doesn't cover up the image. However, I don't like how you used a yellow color for the letter ‘M’ in ‘Melody’, maybe change it into a shade of brown so it will fit well with the color scheme you are going for.

TITLE : 10/10

I think the title fits well with your story. It signifies the female protagonist and the male protagonist's healing relationship. It's also short, and it isn't similar to any other book titles out there, so good job!

STORY DESCRIPTION : 9/10

I like the length of your story description and the fact that it sticks with the specific and relevant points of your story. It introduces the main characters and what kind of situation they are in. However, I don't necessarily like how there are so many large spaces in between the paragraphs, so maybe try reducing the spaces in between them.

PAGE LAYOUT : 10/10

The length of the chapter and paragraphs seems to be enough, it's not too long or too short, which is good. Every chapter seemed like they were neatly written. I didn't see any holes in your chapters, so I think you deserve a full score on Page Layout.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT : 10/10

I was honestly confused about what I had to review on because so far all of your book's aspect is amazing. But, let's just get on with this review.
I think all of your characters have very unique personalities, and that causes them to seem very enjoyable to be read.
I also noticed un-noticeable but big development in the characters, which can make readers have an enjoyable time reading your story.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING/VOCABULARY : 10/10

Please consider making more books because your vocabulary, grammar, and spellings are all so polished and great.
There weren't any spellings nor grammatical errors in your story, and your vocabulary is also very widespread, and that can make readers have an enjoyable time reading your unique writing.

COMMUNICATION WITH READERS : 3/5

I feel like you have somewhat a nice connection with your readers. But I noticed that you hardly reply to some comments, while you answer the others, so this made you look somewhat picky.

GENERAL SATISFACTION : 14/15

Overall, I love your book so much. From the plot to the way you write the story, all of it seems so interesting, and it kept me reading without making me bored in even the slightest way. The characters are also very enjoyable to read about, so I do hope to read more about them.
The pacing of your story also seems very constant, I didn't have a hard time keeping up with it and it isn't too slow so that's great.
I especially love how you placed jokes in your story because it made your story stand out and pretty pleasurable to read.

TOTAL: 75/80

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