BOOK TITLE: Bag Of Feelings

AUTHOR: Poemlandian_10

REVIEWER : ChiddyE01

GENRE: Poetry

COVER: 7/10

The cover is one of the major points of a poetry book, especially on Wattpad. It's easier to select novels to read than poetry in most cases. However, poetry would definitely call the attention of readers except given a good cover.
The cover was okay but not attractive enough to please readers who may just be scrolling for a new work to read.
I do recommend the author  on the use of bold letters, which clearly state the title. However the font used for the subtitle, made it quite invisible in the author's profile. The serenity in the background picture was good as well.

PAGE LAYOUT (Punctuations, Spacing, Paragraph and Lines) : 19/20

The Author  did a great work with the Page layout. The Punctuations were perfectly placed. The spacing, paragraphs and lines, made the work very organized and easy to read.
The author did a really good job here.
Poetry is dependent on lines and spacing especially. This gives the work a great rhythm or flow.

ORIGINALITY: 10/10

The work had no copy. Its an original. Every emotion and feeling of the writer was laced carefully and simply in words.
I believe some of the words were drawn from life experiences as well.

TONE OF EXPRESSION : 8/10

The emotions laid out from the poems,  were fully expressed. Especially the last poem.  The author's reference to a past with family and different present, generated questions in my mind and heart.
Poetry could be a bold admonition or a solemn realization from epiphany.
The poems in this book were drowned in thoughts and they do lead to thoughts.

DEPTH OF UNDERSTANDING/MEANING: 18/20

Each line written in the book was very easy to understand. The chain of words were very simple.
Unlike some poems that would require deep concentration and even confusion, the poems in this book had their meanings at surface.
However I also believe poetry is meant to have a certain spark of mental relevance. Perhaps the writer's view is on basic expression of words which is beautiful but,  there is an even brighter charm on a poetry that expresses itself with great creativity.

MESSAGE DELIVERED : 10/10

Due to clarity of sentences and lines,  the message from every poem was well received. It was really easy to connect the writer and understand the words.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: 19/20

It was a well written work. It reached out to readers in the simplest and beautiful way. The surge of emotions felt from the book was good.
This was not part of the criteria given but the writer's communication with the readers of the book was beautiful as well.

MESSAGE FROM THE REVIEWER ;
Just a change of the book cover perhaps and a little push to expressions, would make the book perfect.

TOTAL: 81/100

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