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Hello judges, participants and readers alike!

Today we bring you the judges' reviews for all the books that were registered into the Fanfiction genre, winners or no!

Please keep in mind that these are the individual judges opinions, and different judges have different review styles and techniques.

A massive thank you to all the judges who put in so much effort to write these reviews, you guys rock!

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 Note:

 Teens of Fazbear's: Days of Endless Sleep - Xx_Pink_Fashion_xX

 Their Legacy | Supergirl - VoidJack

Have been eliminated and therefore did not receive reviews or scores.

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Marked || Naruto - -MayaEm

The way you described things in detail made me want to read more even though its not something I would normally read. I like what you did at the start in the prologue where, at the end, you left the reader feeling hooked. Well in my opinion I was, with the saying "we are all marked". It got me feeling more interested and made me want to carry on reading. The grammar in the story was ok with a few errors here and there. People have spotted it, as you have seen, but it was still readable for me, once I over looked the mistakes. In my opinion, the story is great but I lost interest later on as it wasn't something I would normally read. But I am sure others who are familiar with that type of fanfiction would enjoy this story very much.  

Bring Me Back To Life -ultraviolet_death

The summary itself had me hooked as I personally love anything with Klaus in it. But I am picky with these types of books and you have made an impression. I love that you alone have created a book that I haven't seen before; what life was like for Klaus after the hollow was inside the siblings. The main character, the way you have described her in the book, it had me hooked and makes me want to carry on reading. The grammar is ok and is readable for me. Overall the book is interesting, as I have already pointed out, and its something new that not many people have written about. Where Klaus alone and his overall perspective of him trying to cope after the hollow was placed inside of him. I like this book very much.  

Jennifer - GublerGlam

The summary was good and it had a mysterious vibe to it which I liked. The cover had me wanting to check out this book straight away. The chapters are a bit short but thats not a bad thing so please don't take it that way. I just want to read more and for it to be in more detail if possible. I especially like your main character and the face claim to go with it. If possible I would make the meeting of the bad boy a bit longer so the readers get a better description of him instead of it being rushed. Unless this is what you intended then its fine, I am just being picky. The grammar of this book is ok and is readable for me. Overall the book is good but doesn't have me hooked and wanting to read more. I would make the chapters more interesting and maybe leave the readers hanging at the end. Other than that keep up the good work.  

Sakura-Sensei: Life Lessons - Entangled_Fate 

The summary was ok and at the end it did catch my attention but it didn't make me hooked on the story. The first chapter I read was great but again it didn't gran my attention as it was something I wouldn't normally read. The characters in the book were interesting and some where funny and made me giggle. The grammar in the book was ok and was readable. In my opinion the story is great but I lost interest later on as it wasn't something I would normally read. But I am sure others who are familiar with that type of fanfiction would enjoy this story very much. Carry on the great work.  

Oceans || Kit Harington - theGhostofHarrenhal  

This story is starting beautifully! I love the young romance of Kit and Agnes and I plan to continue reading! I would suggest a proper summary and to possibly add Kit to the cover. Otherwise, beautiful job!  

The Lighthouse | Arthur Curry - KMDowning

When the story began, I was worried I would not get the hook I wanted. You totally delivered! I love the use of folklore and Aquaman. Focus a little bit on your character's development and maybe add more detail to your summary! Make sure to hook readers within the first couple chapters! Job well done!  

Arrow | Henry Mills - KellyLangston58

What an incredible work! I love that Teresa blends right in with the history of the show! She is such a unique and complex character! I cannot wait for more of this story! Work a little on your summary, give readers a hook! Also maybe add some colour to your cover! It helps draw readers if the cover is eye catching! Keep up the good work!  

The Fourth Potter - HermioneJG

There is some work to be done on this book. I would focus on fixing your sentences because they need to be more detailed and less choppy. I would also work on your character development. I suggest character mapping and brainstorming before writing each chapter. I think with a little work this story has good potential. If you need any help, don't hesitate to send me a message! Best of luck!  

Valour | Jaime Lannister - oh-crumbs 

This is a very interesting story! I truly enjoyed it! I would work a little bit on your character development and add more details in your summary! I wish you the best of luck with your rewriting, I know how hard it can be! Your writing style is very unique and I love it!  

Son Of Mikaelson - SpntvdtoCrossover

The summary really interested me and I loved the quotes at the start as it made me want to read more. The chapter where the cast was mentioned I love how you have quotes for each chapter as I got to know the characters a bit more I also loved were your part one of darken gif and the quote it made me understand him more as a character. Your first chapter was ok but I didn't like how you requested people to vote and comment straight away at the start before you even get a few more votes it makes people pressured and me personal I wouldn't have done that on the first chapter before I need I have quite a lot of reads and votes other than that your story is great and keep up the good work.  

Rachel Salvatore - katielou17656

idk it was a pretty good book but it didn't intrigue me.

Seeking Serendipity - ElaineSnow

 Damn this author described and wrote everything PERFECTLY! HOLY MOLY THIS STORY WAS AMAZING!!! I AM NOT EVEN IN THE FANDOM BUT THIS STORY WANTED ME TO JOIN RIGHT AWAY!Probably one of the BEST books I've judged ever!!! This author deserves way more recognition!! 

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Thank you to every author who participated and every judge who put their hand up to help!

The Shadow Team

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