So I have been rereading the comments and have decided to do a few things

1 I shall make a sequel to chapter 1

2 i shal re read everything and fix my horrible grammar mistakes

3 i shall plug these fellow people ( DreamBird711 DarthVader7754 Immature_potato  @ShadowWarrior334 

4. I have also been struggling with some writer's block but I have a few chapter ideas in mind so bear with me

5. I was also grounded for over a month, back for a day, then grounded again so I am very sorry for lack of updates.

6. Enjoy!