By bangtanforever355 :

This time I'm reviewing an anthology, and I just have to say WOW the first poem was so interesting to read! The grammar and adjectives used were wonderful! There weren't many punctuation mistakes and the use of explaining at the end was appreciated!

However, it can take away a bit of the fun of reading it and interpreting it in our own way but on the other hand in some poems, it's good to have a little context!
I definitely enjoyed seeing the unique views of issues facing society and community today like Cisgender and suicidal thoughts.
Being split into paragraphs is my OFU (overall favourite uses) making it easy to read! And I loved the rhyming scheme!

However I did have a little problem understanding some words in the poems as I haven't heard them before so I had to go into a dictionary to understand, maybe you could do a small short selection for people who have dyslexia or not used to really unique words?

So out of the point system (yes I've added a point system now)

Grammar & punctuality: 9.7
Adjectives, synonyms, etc: 10.
Reading level: 8.6
Length: 4.3
Reasons:
The grammar and punctuation are on point but could have some more exclamation marks to provide excitement or danger.
The adjectives, synonyms, etc. Are incredible and diverse!
Reading level is a little lower only because it was struggling at some points where I didn't understand what was happening or what the words were, maybe add an index? Like a list of really hard words at the end and what they mean.
Length. Now here's where I had an issue, the first chapter it felt really natural and smooth especially with the rhyming effect, however at least 1-2 poems were a little long/short and didn't pull me in as much but that's okay I think it's just my taste in poems. I think to keep your maximum poetry length around 500 words for every poem to make it consistent but that's just a suggestion!

Overall rating and assessment:
9.3!

You have a talent and potential to be an incredible poet, more than you are already! Keep up the good work!