By Froster_flakes

This is an interesting one! I haven't really reviewed poems much but it definitely is fun! The style of your poem really stood out where there were paragraphs of four sentences, very good punctuation and description of how it was making you feel and emphasis on loving harder.
It was worded a little different and seemed at some places it needed a bit of different wording such as,

"As I tried to go through it
A little more.
I found that I can do it,
Love a little hard.

It made my soul feel better,
To see people cherish
And being the reason
Made me love a little hard."

This is really good but could be so much more! The last sentence of both paragraphs needed to say "harder" but that's just a small mistake the one that stood out was,
"To see people cherish"
Did you mean "To see the people I cherish"? Or "To see people blossom"?

Small mistakes like this don't outweigh the good but this is constructive criticism not hate talk or just being mean, I only want to help you be a better writer.
One last thing is, and don't worry I do this a lot too, if you want to make the reader really love your poem even more it would be better to "Show not Tell"

Such as "It made my soul feel better" reworded this could be outstanding.
Example: "Deep within there was a flutter, like a butterfly breaking out of its cocoon."

That is a easy mistake everyone makes, but with all the mistakes aside you have a good Poem which can be read pretty easily, very good length and emphasis on loving harder. Keep up the good work and you'll be fantastic in no time! Thank you for asking me to review your poem and sorry if it seemed harsh ;-;

Final rating: 7.3/10