This is my first book, so I'm not sure how it'll turn out, but I hope you will like it.
And I'd appreciate if you all would help me by giving your opinions on the characters, camps, names, etc.
A bit of criticism is always good. I can take it if it'll help be improve on my writing.
And please:
If you like the story, please vote. It'll help me a LOT

Feel free to comment on your favorite name.
(Mine are Amberflame and Hollysplash)

Bye for now!!!
-Meowlia

Treeclan
Leader
Stonestar- dark grey tom with black paws
Apprentice- Needlepaw

Medicine cat
Branchfoot- light brown tabby tom
Apprentice- Snowpaw

Warriors
Pineclaw- dark ginger tom with a white muzzle and paws
Wrentail- cream white she- cat with light blue eyes
Amberflame- light orange she- cat
Apprentice- Sweetpaw
Frostfeather- brown and white she- cat
Apprentice- Treepaw
Blazetail- light brown tom with dark paws, muzzle and tail
Apprentice- Leafpaw
Stemflower- black she- cat with yellow eyes
Apprentice- Whitepaw
Bluenose- fluffy grey tom
Honeypelt- golden tabby she- cat
Apprentice- Pouncepaw
Rainheart- grey and white tom

Apprentices
Sweetpaw- orange tom
Whitepaw- fluffy black tom with white paws
Leafpaw- light brown tabby she- cat with amber eyes
Treepaw- dark brown tabby tom
Snowpaw- black she- cat with white patches and green eyes
Pouncepaw- small brown tom with a white muzzle
Needlepaw- fluffy orange she- cat

Queens
Swiftfeather- tortoiseshell she- cat (mother to Ashkit- fluffy grey she- kit, and Boulderkit- brown tabby tom) Mate: Stonestar
Lightsky- white she- cat with orange ears and tail (mother to Blackkit- black she- kit, Owlkit- orange and white tom and Silverkit- silver tom, foster mother to Fernkit- light grey she- kit) Mate: Pineclaw
Smalldawn- golden she- cat with green eyes
Mate: Blazetail

Elders
Spotear- white tom with black spots
Waterheart- white she- cat with amber eyes

Moonclan

Leader
Lightstar- Siamese she- cat

Deputy
Wetbranch- fluffy tortoiseshell she- cat

Medicine cats
Hazelfur- yellow she- cat with amber eyes
Blacknose- grey tom with a black nose

Warriors
Lionfoot- golden tom
Apprentice- Smallpaw
Stripetail- white tom with black stripes and green eyes
Needlepelt- fluffy brown she- cat
Apprentice- Goldenpaw
Seedclaw- Black and white she- cat
Apprentice- Starpaw
Rockfall- grey tom with blue eyes
Birchleaf- brown tabby tom with white paws and tail
Copperpatch- fluffy white tom with orange patches
Robinswoop- sand coloured she- cat
Apprentice- Maplepaw

Apprentices

Starpaw- black she- cat with white speckles
Maplepaw- orange tom
Goldenpaw- fluffy yellow tom with amber eyes
Smallpaw- very small orange and black she- cat

Queens
Bluewhisker- grey- blue she- cat (mother to Rosekit- cream white she- kit, Wingkit- orange tabby she- kit, and Leopardkit- yellow tom with brown spots
Mate: Lionfoot
Tansyfoot- pure white she- cat
Mate: Birchleaf

Elders
Mousenose- brown tom
Meadowtail- rusty she- cat with white paws
Hollysplash- fluffy black she- cat with a white tipped tail
Sparrowflight- grey tabby tom

Brookclan
Leader
Foxstar- bright orange tom

Deputy
Rainfall- black she- cat

Medicine cat
Bigear- brown tabby tom with big ears
Apprentice- Redpaw

Warriors
Wavetail- blue- grey she- cat
Apprentice- Juniperpaw
Silverwater- deaf white she- cat
Ravenwing- black tom with bright green eyes
Apprentice- Pondpaw
Greyclaw- dark grey fluffy tom
Apprentice- Frogpaw
Berryfur- black and white she- cat
Ivydew- calico she- cat
Apprentice- Cloudpaw
Flowerpool- brown tabby she- cat
Apprentice- Smokepaw
Daisyfoot- very light brown she- cat
Slatewing- white tom
Apprentice- Mountainpaw
Darksky- black tom with yellow eyes
Rustycloud- white tom with ginger splotches

Apprentices
Pondpaw- brown tom
Smokepaw- grey tabby tom
Mountainpaw- light grey she- cat
Juniperpaw- orange tabby tom
Cloudpaw- white she- cat
Frogpaw- fluffy orange tom with flashing blue eyes
Redpaw- dark ginger tom with big black paws

Elders
Mossfield- tortoiseshell she- cat
Brightnose- yellow she- cat
Smokeshine- grey tom