So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !

A special thanks to the judges Eveleft13  and  jojobean1298  for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

                     🌠 1st place 🌠

  Undead homicide by IsisSapphire

                    🌠  2nd place 🌠

         A whimsical at Mussoorie by
             Confused_Soul_Kriya

    
                     🌠 3rd place 🌠

       God's Jealousy in their Love by
                       inorinanase

         🌠 Honourable mention 🌠

       To Live life to the fullest by
              HalfsisterofPercy

PARTICIPANTS SCORES:

1.Loving Luscious by Ashanie_Ash

Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 8/10
Plot:  8/10
Originality: 9/10
Characters: 9/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 5/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 6/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
Attractive Power: 8/10

Total: 77/100

Review: The plot feels very fresh and I really liked Luscious’ character.  The blend between being tough and a secret softie developed his character very well. His love for his family was uncompromising and it broke my heart about the way his parents treated him in the flashback.  You have a very nice writing style, but I would recommend some of the grammar, word usage needs cleaned up a bit.  There were some tense issues, singular/plural issues, and some incorrect word usage that might be something that was autocorrected incorrectly.  Fantastic Job!

2.The Butterfly Effect The_Reminiscent96

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 8/10
Characters: 8/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 7/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 8/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Attractive Power: 8/10

Total: 77/100

Review:

Your writing has a very poetic feel and has beautiful descriptors, for example, the description of the differences between their eyes.  I could clearly visualize what I thought they looked like.  As for the structure, there were some long paragraphs I would recommend breaking up a bit.  You may want to also look at the chapter with the multiple flashbacks, it was easy to get a little lost as they moved from one to another (in my opinion). Great Job!

3. Undead Homicide IsisSapphire

Title: 4/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 8/10
Plot:  9/10
Originality: 10/10
Characters: 9/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 9/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 10/10
Writing Style:10 /10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attractive Power: 10/10

Total: 93/100

Review: Your cover is beautiful and captivating.  It was the first thing that caught my eye.  I really enjoyed your writing style and it flowed very well.  The death description in chapter five was haunting and even with its short length, very impactful.  Great job.  I would recommend either changing your blurb or getting rid of the prologue.  They are essentially the same and I don’t think you need to duplicate it.  Very captivating read!

4.Light to My Lamp WhisperingFlames

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 6/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 8/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attractive Power: 9/10

Total: 85/100

Review: The language used to describe the confusing mess of a relationship between Swara and Sanskar was beautiful.  The emotions between the characters were portrayed flawlessly.  Great job on the portrayal of your character’s emotions. There a couple of really long paragraphs I would break up a bit to keep your flow consistent and there are some punctuation issues with extra spacing that could be cleaned up.   Great story!

5.A Whimsical at Mussoorie Confused_Soul_Kriya

Title: 5/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 10/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 10/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attractive Power: 9/10

Total: 91/100

Review:

I really enjoyed the emotions in the first chapter while both breakups were described.  The secen where Vikrant and Prerna borke up was especially heartwrenching. Your characters are amazing and I am rooting for them to work out.  In the blurb, I like how you called out the character’s similarities and difference, I would maybe reduce it just a little and set up the story just a little bit more.  Keep up the great work!

6. God’s Jealousy in Their Love inorinanase

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Originality: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 6/10
Vocabulary/Spelling: 9/10
Writing Style: 7/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attractive Power: 9/10

Total: 89/100

Review:

 I really enjoyed Sam’s brave character and spent the whole first chapter wondering if he had a death wish.  Sam is a really likable character that I think readers will really enjoy him. It took me a little bit to get used to the usage of  :, “”, and <>.  The name and colon kind of reminded me of texting.  I would probably take a look and stick to one way of communicating the dialogue.  I think it will help the flow.  Wonderful job!

7.Letting Go by arireynolds5

• Title: 5
• Cover: 5
• Blurb: 7
• Plot: 8
• Originality: 9
• Characters: 8
• Grammar & punctuation: 7
• Vocabulary & spelling: 8
• Writing style: 7
• Overall enjoyment: 8
• Attractive power: 7

Total points: 79

I did enjoy the plot of this story the most. I loved that after everything the character went through, she was still able to face her issues head on. In terms of the writing, there were some parts that confused me because it would switch narratives mid paragraph. In the flashback there was a part that wasn’t italicized, so I was bit confused on the timeline. Overall though, I enjoyed reading this story! I don’t think it’s complete yet, so I’d love to read more, but I believe the author did a good job so far!

8.To Live Life to the Fullest by HalfsisterofPercy

• Title: 5
• Cover: 5
• Blurb: 8
• Plot: 9
• Originality: 10
• Characters: 8
• Grammar & punctuation: 9
• Vocabulary & spelling: 8
• Writing style: 9
• Overall enjoyment: 9
• Attractive power: 8

Total points: 88

This story was beautifully written and I found it inspirational! There are tons of people who have found quarantine to be a difficult experience. The author does a well job of reminding her readers that no one is ever truly alone and that through the tough time there is always light at the end of the tunnel. I find that to be a refreshing a heartwarming message. This was a pretty great read and I’m glad to have judged it!

9.Ghost-In Instagram by AngelMickaella

• Title: 3
• Cover: 3
• Blurb: 8
• Plot: 6
• Originality: 8
• Characters: 6
• Grammar & punctuation: 6
• Vocabulary & spelling: 6
• Writing style: 6
• Overall enjoyment: 5
• Attractive power: 6

Total points: 63

This story has a sweet message behind it. I would imagine that the fans of fallen celebrities would love to see that last message for the millions they’ve left behind. I do feel that the dialogue of the story could be improved. The general story telling could use better vocabulary and word flow. However, I was able to recognize the potential of this story. I personally have not a read a story like this so it was refreshing to read a plot with this creativity. This was a fun read!

10.Bekhayali Mein Bhi Tera: by Slytherinchick25

• Title: 4
• Cover: 5
• Blurb: 8
• Plot: 8
• Originality: 7
• Characters: 9
• Grammar & Punctation: 7
• Vocabulary & spelling: 8
• Writing style: 8
• Overall enjoyment: 7
• Attractive power: 7

Total points: 78

I loved the drama of this story! Though the plot of “it was all just a dream” is used frequently, I feel the author did a good job of making it her own. I loved how supportive and caring both these main characters were. It was interesting to see how the main character struggled with wanting to be happy but also wanting to keep her family happy. She was such a strong character and I loved to read about her! This was an interesting read, and I’m glad to have been able to judge it!

11.You are my asset not liability by RiyaMaji

• Title: 3
• Cover: 4
• Blurb: 5
• Plot: 6
• Originality: 8
• Characters: 6
• Grammar & punctuation: 5
• Vocabulary & spelling: 5
• Writing style: 5
• Enjoyment: 5
• Attractive power: 5

Total points: 57

I loved the drama of this story! Though the plot of “it was all just a dream” is used frequently, I feel the author did a good job of making it her own. I loved how supportive and caring both these main characters were. It was interesting to see how the main character struggled with wanting to be happy but also wanting to keep her family happy. She was such a strong character and I loved to read about her! This was an interesting read, and I’m glad to have been able to judge it!

12.Tum Nahi Samjhogi by Rikara_sk

• Title: 3
• Cover: 4
• Blurb: 5
• Plot: 5
• Originality: 7
• Characters: 7
• Grammar & punctuation: 7
• Vocabulary & spelling: 6
• Writing style: 5
• Overall enjoyment: 5
• Attractive power: 5

Total points: 59

I was confused while reading this story. The flow was a bit scattered and I had issues keeping up with who was being narrated at times. There were paragraphs that weren’t written in English and then there would be no translation for it, so I think that had a big part in my confusion. However, there were moments in this story that I recognized where author did a GREAT job with description. I just wish I knew the language that was used so I could grasp the entire story!

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