💫SCIENCE FICTION RESULTS💫
So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !
A special thanks to the judges timolily and UditaJaiswal3
for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.
So without much delay .
🌠1st place 🌠
Amantia-Posion shot by marsaumell
🌠2nd place 🌠
An heir of Oragon by Castila_Rosch
3rd place🌠
Finding you by -cosmicgalaxy-
💫Honourable mention💫
King Eden by RowanCarver
THE REVIEWS AND SCORES OF ALL THE PARTICIPANTS ARE LISTED BELOW.
1. Intersecting Parallels Docdrills
Title 3
Cover 4
Blurb 8
Plot 8
Originality 8
Characters 6
Grammar/punctuation 6
Vocabulary/Spelling 6
Writing Style 6
Overall enjoyment 6
Attractive Power 7
Total:68
REVIEW:
I loved the blurb and was excited to read the story. You certainly have a talent for plotting and creating a story, but your writing style and grammar need a little work in order for the book to flow. Overall I enjoyed it.
2.DarkerSecrets weirdogalxx
Title 3
Cover 3
Blurb 7
Plot 6
Originality 6
Characters 9
Grammar/punctuation 9
Vocabulary/Spelling 9
Writing Style 9
Overall enjoyment 8
Attractive Power 7
Total:76
Review:
You have a fantastic writing style and a great voice. The cover and the blurb don’t really sell your book. Readers might gloss over it because of that, which is a shame. Great characterization. You have a talent for writing, I hope you continue on this path.
3.The Truth Untold stats7
Title 3
Cover 4
Blurb 5
Plot 5
Originality 5
Characters 4
Grammar/punctuation 5
Vocabulary/Spelling 6
Writing Style 4
Overall enjoyment 4
Attractive Power 4
Total: 49
Review:
It’s clear that you are at the start of your writing journey. I would advise you to take time to read books in your genre and look at the writing style, and the basic rules of punctuation and grammar. Writing your book was the first step, good luck for the future.
4.Through the Wormhole CroodsGirl
Title 3
Cover 4
Blurb 7
Plot 7
Originality 8
Characters 9
Grammar/punctuation 7
Vocabulary/Spelling 8
Writing Style 7
Overall enjoyment 8
Attractive Power 7
Total:75
Review:
This was a great story. Your writing style is very good, although sometimes you have a tendency to over-describe instead of incorporating it into the story (info-dumping). I loved the first person point of view and the characterization was excellent. Overall it was very enjoyable.
5.Allodynia Aarya2103
Title 4
Cover 4
Blurb 9
Plot 9
Originality 9
Characters 7
Grammar/punctuation 6
Vocabulary/Spelling 6
Writing Style 7
Overall enjoyment 7
Attractive Power 8
Total:76
Review:
What a fantastic idea for a story. I was drawn in straight away by Jessica’s problems and how it affects her life. You are aware of your difficulties with the English language, which can affect the flow of the story, but it doesn’t draw away too much from the enjoyment of the book. I’d suggest asking a friend to edit it for you. You have some great ideas, good luck with your writing journey.
6.At the end of the world MetroLynx7
Title 3
Cover 3
Blurb 6
Plot 6
Originality 7
Characters 8
Grammar/punctuation 9
Vocabulary/Spelling 9
Writing Style 8
Overall enjoyment 7
Attractive Power 8
Total:74
Review:
Your writing style is great. I wonder, however, if your book isn’t more suited to the fantasy category than science-fiction. There is often quite a lot going on in the story and it is difficult to keep up. Longer chapters with a slightly slower pace might be better suited to explain such a complex world. In all though it was very enjoyable.
7. Title- King Eden by RowanCarver
Title- 5/5
Cover- 4.5/5
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lurb- 9/10
Plot- 8.5/10
Originality- 8.5/10
Characters- 9/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 9/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 9/10
Writing style- 9/10
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Attractive power- 8.5/10
Total- 88.5/100
Review- I love how you started the chapter the female figure is shown very wise and how she deal with the situation of her child. I love your cover the most. It also have less grammar mistakes overall I really enjoyed reading your story
8.An Heir Of Oragon by Castila_Rosch
Title- 5/5
Cover- 5/5
Blurb- 9/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Originality- 8/10
Characters- 8.5/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 8.5/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 9/10
Writing style- 9/10
Overall enjoyment- 9.5/10
Attractive power- 9/10
Total- 90/100
Review- I love the concept of your story and how it begins. I really like your title and your cover is also good. I really like the character of Maya I like how you described the parts.
9 .Amanita- Poison Shot by marsaumell
Title- 5/5
Cover- 5/5
Blurb-9/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Originality- 9.5/10
Characters- 9.5/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 10/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 9/10
Writing style- 10/10
Overall enjoyment- 10/10
Attractive power- 9.5/10
Total- 96/100
Review- Overall I love all the part of your story. The character of Daphne is amazing and I love the concept of your story it was unique I will surely be reading whole story after this. Your creativity was clear in your story
10. Carnations prajakta_19
Title- 5/5
Cover- 4.5/5
Blurb- 7.5/10
Plot- 7/10
Originality- 8/10
Characters- 8.5/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 7.5/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 7.5/10
Writing style- 8/10
Overall enjoyment- 8/10
Attractive power- 8.5/10
Total- 80.5/100
Review- I like how you have described the lottery one how and why it was. Though I will recommend update soon the whloe concept will be clear by then and check your grammar I am sure your story will gain more popopularity
11. Finding you by -cosmicgalaxy-
Title- 5/5
Cover- 4.5/5
Blurb- 8.5/10
Plot- 9/10
Originality- 8.5/10
Characters- 8.5/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 9/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 9/10
Writing style- 9.5/10
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Attractive power- 9/10
Total- 89.5/100
Review- I liked the title of the story. Grammar was really good, the author must've taken his/her time with the chapters! The descriptions were also very good. I like the blurb of the story
12.The World Outside My Bedroom Window by ThatRandomRower
Title- 4/5
Cover- 4.5/5
Blurb- 8.5/10
Plot- 7/10
Originality- 7.5/10
Characters- 8.5/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 8/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 8.5/10
Writing style- 8/10
Overall enjoyment- 8/10
Attractive power- 8.5/10
Total- 81/100
Review- I like the concept of your story but your story do have grammar mistakes. The blurb is the part I like the most and title is also suitable for the story. Overall I like reading the story
13. It's not Cinderella story by shenahayes2018
Title- 5/5
Cover- 4.5/5
Blurb- 9/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Originality- 9/10
Characters- 8.5/10
Grammar/ Punctuation- 8/10
Vocabulary/ spelling- 8.5/10
Writing style- 8.5/10
Overall enjoyment- 8.5/10
Attractive power- 9/10
Total- 88/100
Review- I really like your title it shows the story you have wrote plus the cover is also great. I enjoyed reading the story. Creativity is also shown of yours.
Here are you stickers.
I propose fully wrote the names of the book so that no one else can use it. I know you all are very good but someone who is not a participant can claim this as his/her own.
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