Author: Thewritingpaw236

Reviewer: _zaintassu_

Chapters Reviewed: 6

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First impressions:

Before we begin, I would like to mention that the first impressions, which include the cover, the title and the blurb is very important. These are the factors which tempt a reader to read a book.

Cover wise:

The cover did not impress me to a great extent. It's evident that the girl is posed as the main character but what else? It did not have a title or a tagline or anything for that matter. You did not put an effort to provide the readers with a good visual of your book.

Title wise:

Escaping self. The title does paint a picture in the readers mind. It's also connects us with the story as we read futher.

Blurb wise:

The blurb is exactly three lines. Three lines which did not connect me to the story. I disagree with the first two lines as I read the book. Nerezza does not have average problems. The third can perk a readers interest.

The blurb you submitted during the sign in was short too but more informative. The current blurb does not even connect me with the title.

As mentioned in the beginning, these elements are very influential. These elements paint a picture of the book in the reader's eyes. You need to put a lot more work into this.

Writing style:

Every writer have their own unique style. Your writing style made me wonder a few things. The start was quite impressive. But as the story went on, I felt a little detached from the story.

The description of Nerezza's surroundings and her hurdles also kind of faded away.

Plot:

Let's say the plot is my favourite aspect of this story. It's unique and very interesting. The change in Sethry's intentions and Nerezza finally recognising her surroundings and the injustice done to her by her own parents is very intriguing.

Character development:

Here again, the beginning made me connect with the characters. In the first chapter, you have also described Sethry's surroundings and his hunt. As the story moved on, I felt detached from Nerezza's character. I felt like you did not take time to describe her feelings, her hurt when she was punished or looked down at.

The plot would have turned into a beautiful and exciting story if you would've paid more attention to the character development. It actually felt like you are loosing interest in the characters. Your writing style and character development should've been constant throughout the book.

Grammar and typos:

I Couldn't find one grammar mistake or a typo. Your vocabulary was nifty too.

Final impressions:

You can say I was happy to read this book. I would've been happier if I could've had a constant connection with the character.

It's also the message it conveys that is august. I hope you put a little more work into it and make it more effective.

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And here's your very much deserved Good Reads Sticker!

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