Author name: dabVreha

Reviwer name: Shraelyn

Chapters reviewed: 8 (including everything prior Prologue)

Your Cover

In the start of the book you showed all your readers the covers you have made/ someone else made. And personally I think all of those, ALL, were perfect for the book. It depicted exactly what the book is based on, it's plot and importance. I don't know how much more emphasis I can put on that one.

Your Title

The thing with us, writers that is, is that we want to put what the book is about in the title and make it worth it. We want to convey it to the reader what they should expect and are reading about. And a little mystery to it. You did exactly all those things and that's why your title became a little too long. But other than that there is no flaw in it. Not in the way you defined the full form of AIDS in an aesthetic way.

Just wanted to say, let your title keep all it's creativeness but in an shoryer form, if you could.

Your Blurb

It was good. But it was a bit too revealing. The idea of blurb is to interest the reader enough for them to venture futher and give your book a chance but whike I totally think that ot was really alluring it revealed too many facts about Jonathan and Ashleigh's story.

Your Plot

Your Plot was really interesting. And though, it was a little repeated it wasn't cliché. And with your writing style you somehow pulled it off. Also, I lked it very much when you started your story with a dream and managed to keep it simple, investing and non-confusing. Well done there.

Also, AIDS: Affinity In A Dying Soul is a book that deals with a deadly disease but also tells a tale of two people in love and how they overcome it. Like seriously, applause.

Grammar and Typos

Here you may have a problem. Your tense gets a little confusing and changes here and then. Not much but definetly something that needs editing. Also I found a few typos. That little tears patched up would put another stone out of the path.

Research

Since you are dealing with a severe cause of death here, which is not all that common I think you should do some more research; deep digger and coke up with some information that would carve elyour story and make it better.

Interaction with Readers

This is really important. Because readers are the people because of whom are stories stands where they do. They promote us and urge us forward. So it is important to solve their queries and thank them. And you did a really good job of it. You thanked them and told them when the next updates gonna be. Really good. Keep it up.

Last note: I am really sorry for such a looooong delay. You have all the right to hate be but please don't hate and blame my Fam. I had some personal problems that needed immediate attention and I couldn't review your book as promised. I really am sorry.

But do note that the review was totally honest and told from my opinion. If you fing anything offensive I am sorry.

XOXO

Shravani.