Yeah. I was thinking of putting it in my Notebook. But the old original was here. So meh.

Alright!

Time to compare!

Drawings.!

And. It's the drawings of Cloud's Alters.... Yeeeee.

So, like, last year. I made....

This horrible drawing:

Yeah... Let me explain this... And why it's horrible...

1.) Their clothes

- The way the clothes form. Lack of any natural forms.. No lines that could mean folds... Like that

2.) Their hair

- I sucked. At drawing hair at first... It lacked other shapes I could use. The hair looks unnatural. And I mean with all of them. Even the spiky ends...

3.) The way they frickin posed

... I honestly don't need to explain. Especially them being stiff... And their hands...

4.) The worst idea of mine and exaggerated the scars on Cumulus

- F*ck me.. :l

It was a horrible exaggerated idea..

And. It makes him look like a tiger honestly

5.) Stratus' and Cumulus' feathery scarf thingys

- They both look... Similar to the way I did their hair. Lacking any more shape.

And there are other things that make this crappy... ._.

Especially. Those were the days.. that I sucked at eyes. So I didn't add them.. ._.

And...!

Here's the one I made the other day:

It's honestly better.

Though... I separated them. Because it seemed better. .__.

Their hair is better, the clothes seem better.

Plus I added Cumulo.

(Even though he's Nimbus' other self. .__.)

(And that's honestly why they aren't between a barrier line. .___.)

Reee...!

They're honestly better.

I might do them digitally soon.

... Ree.

So, yeah. A comparison..! :I

At least I improved.. .__.

I should get another sketch pad someday...

Okay, I'm done here.

See y'all