Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls.

I'm about to begin editing this tiny little bundle of joy. Which will follow a similar sort of schedule. A chapter a week, on Thursday or Friday. Hooray, huh?

While I won't ask you all to retread this book while it's being editing and tell me how it's doing (though you totally totally can if you want), I will ask you to do something else for me.

I'd be very glad if you could tell me something you found that's wrong with this here story. There are several issues, I know and I'll work very hard to fix them, but I'll be very glad if you could point out what you think are the biggest flaws this manuscript faces.

The best critic will get a jolly good shoutout and a character named after him/her in that romance book I'm doing called Looking for Alice.

Be very brutal.

Love,
David V.M.