Book Title: On The Other Side (When We Meet) 

Author Name: classykrissi

Reviewer: debbieryan12

Book Title (4/5): 

Some promising. 

Book Cover (4/5):

Seems very eye catching. But I suggest you make the title a little bit clearer as it’s hard to read it. 

Blurb (7/10): 

Was nicely written, though it didn’t compel me to jump into the story. 

Character Development (10/15):

I love how you created a cast chapter to let your readers know how you’ve pictured your characters to be. However they still needs to be described more in details. 

Plot And Flow of the story (11/15): 

The story flowed perfectly along with the plot but I suggest you try and spice things up for your readers. 

Creative And writing style (10/15): 

Your writing style is good but could be better. Your work lacks creativity, like I mentioned earlier I suggest you spice things up. Try to get your readers hooked and excited for the next chapter. 

Vocabulary (7/10): 

Your choice of words are simple but needs to be improved. 

Grammar And Spelling (7/10): 

I don’t find any spelling mistakes but I found some grammatical errors, which needs to be improved . 

Interaction With Readers (4/5): 

You interacted well with your readers. 

Overall Enjoyment (7/10): 

I feel like your story line is great but needs improvement. 

Total score : 71/100

Thank you. Hope it helps.