Sorry if you wanted another chapter. I just want feedback on my work! Plz, just give me feedback and I'll post the next chapter. It's not that hard. Criticize me like my amazing 4/5th grade English and math teacher did. It really works and helped me a lot, and I'm hoping for similar criticism so I can get better at writing(I am not showing my teacher this story. I would be way too embarrassed and not stick around for feedback thinking it's horrible.). Have a nice day!

PS. You can judge me on good/bad character traits and how they work with each other, different things that don't make sense, and if possible, plz correct anything involving British terms. Not just grammar.

See ya!

PPS/PSS(IDK which one it is). I will not post the next chapter unless someone comments on the book. It doesn't have to be bad, nor good. JUST COMMENT SOMETHING ABOUT MY BOOK PLZ.