The reviews for other Romance participate🇳🇬🇳🇬🇳🇬
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🇳🇬Book name: my roommate by Chidiogor18
Cover- 5/10
Title: 4/10
Description: 4/10
Opening line: 6/10
Spelling: 5/10
Vocabulary Development: 5/10
Character development: 4/10
Nigerian based: 9/15
Nigerian name: 8/10
Nigerian enough: 7/10
Total- 57
Your story definitely has potential only needs abit of refinement. Thorough editing, spacing etc. Also, a new more attractive cover and you're definitely on your way.
🇳🇬Book name: societal status by pleasymatt
Cover- 4/10
Title- 6/10
Description- 3/10
Opening line- 4/10
Spelling- 6/10
Vocabulary development: 4/10
Character development:4/10
Nigerian based: 9/15
Nigerian name- 7.5/10
Nigerian enough: 7/10
Total- 54.5
I'll be honest, I don't like your cover at all, it isn't eye catching and does not pique readers. Your descriptions are no in depth and basically on the surface and your conversations don't flow naturally sometimes. Also, you mainly tell instead of showing, something not encouraged in writing. We don't need to be told, show us instead. You don't need to tell us that this person is a black American, let him mention it. Describe how he looks. Try stuff like that. Your book has a lot of unexploited potential and I feel that if you work on these areas, you'll get there eventually. Nice job you're doing though
🇳🇬Book name: Like stars by sheymihloreh
Cover- 6/10
Title: 4/10
Description- 6/10
Opening line: 3/10
Spelling: 6/10
Vocabulary development: 5/10
Character development: 3/10
Nigerian Based: 7/15
Nigerian name: 8/10
Nigerian enough: 6/10
Total- 54
I'll be brutally honest and say I had a hard time understanding your book. Your cover was pretty but I really think it could be better and your title seems to have nothing to do with the book yet but maybe it will later on. You cluster your paragraphs together and I think your writing would be neater if you left some space between paragraphs. Overall, your book is nice but you need to put some work to make it even better! Good job by the way.
🇳🇬 Book name: Something about you by meen_arh
Cover- 5/10
Title- 6/10
Description- 8/10
Opening line- 7.5/10
Spelling: 8.5/10
Vocabulary Development: 9/10
Character development: 7.5/10
Nigerian based: 10/15
Nigerian name: 8/10
Nigerian enough: 8/10
Total-77.5
I loved your book, to be honest. You write so beautifully and your settings are magnificent. However, my problem is your cover, it could be better as most people on wattpad judge books by their covers. Your title too is okay but in my opinion could also be better. I would honestly love to complete your book in my free time.
🇳🇬Book name: Pulling your heart strings by jasminestars
Title- 7/10
Description: 6/10
Opening line-5/10
Spelling- 7/10
Vocabulary Development: 6.5/10
Character development: 6/10
Nigerian based: 5/15
Nigerian name: 8/10
Nigerian enough- 4/10
Total- 61.5
I loved you book! It was a cute and fun read plus your cover just gives us this warm and fuzzy feeling. Your title seems on point too so no issues there, my only problem is that your book isn't really Nigerian enough to me. But it's a really lovely book tho.
🇳🇬Book name: Hello Nigeria by She_is_queen_now
Cover- 6/10
Title- 7/10
Description- 8/10
Opening line- 5/10
Spelling: 8/10
Vocabulary Development: 6/10
Character development: 5/10
Nigerian based: 3/15
Nigerian name: 3/10
Nigerian enough: 3/10
Total-54
Hello Nigeria. Well, starting with the cover, the lettering isn't bold enough and that's basically the only thing I have against the cover. With the Title, I want to assume the main character is relocating back to Nigeria but I'm not seeing anything Nigeria about the book. The names are not Nigerian as well. Your description that is your blurb is very catchy but compared to the blurb, your opening line is a direct contrast because it didn't catch my attention at all. Also work on your vocabulary and please try to make this book as Nigerian as Possible. Thank you.
🇳🇬Book name: The Billionaire's Daughter by jhemma456
Cover- 7/10
Title- 8/10
Description- 7/10
Opening line- 6/10
Spelling: 8/10
Vocabulary Development: 6/10
Character development: 6/10
Nigerian based: 3/15
Nigerian name: 3/10
Nigerian enough: 3/10
Total-57
The Cover is a bit catchy and it's not blending well to the title. Billionaire Daughter, I thought I'd see someone looking rich with cars and all of that but that can be over looked. Plus, the lettering is quite messy. The Description of your book is Catchy, I'd give you that but your opening line ain't unique at all. It's like every other Wattpad book, starting with a wake up scene. Being creative also means you should be unique. Some of your dialogues were not in quotes, you should edit that. Lastly, there is barely anything Nigerian about your book. The names don't fit and the descriptions don't fit one bit. I'm seeing white characters and the only African Character is Van Vicker who is Ghanian. It should portray our culture.
🇳🇬 Book name: Life of Aisha by Zeelove17
Cover- 6/10
Title- 3/5
Description- 5/10
Opening line- 7/10
Spelling: 8/10
Vocabulary Development: 4/10
Character development: 6/10
Nigerian based: 13/15
Nigerian name: 10/10
Nigerian enough: 10/10
Total-71
Your book is a very very good book. I normally don't read Muslim based books (no offence intended) but when I see a good one, I definitely go for it and yours is one of the good ones. Now lemme start my criticism.
Your cover isn't my best. The character is slant and the lettering are kinda too small. Your title is like you couldn't wait to put something on cover so you just dumped something that you might have seen on another persons book because I've seen titles very very similar to this. In essence, it lacks uniqueness. Your description is lacking a lot and doesn't draw in readers. It's rushed, no punctuations and a grammatical blunder "found out" instead of "find out". The opening line is also cliché. But apart from all this, Your book is good.
🇳🇬Book name: My love Conquers by Cole_ella
Cover- 9/10
Title- 4/5
Description- 7/10
Opening line- 8/10
Spelling: 8/10
Vocabulary Development: 6/10
Character development: 6/10
Nigerian based: 9/15
Nigerian name: 7/10
Nigerian enough: 6/10
Total- 69
The cover is quite detailed and I like the way it depicts the diversity in race and culture. It's obvious this story would have a lot of drama and I like drama. The title is a bit cliche for me because it's very common but it's kinda the right title for the book. The book is catchy and personally I'd continue to read it...
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