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🇳🇬SUNFLOWER' by @giftTaylor*
Cover- 5
Title- 3
Description- 3
Opening Line- 2
Spelling- 4
Voc Dev- 3
Character Dev- 1
Nigerian Based- 7
Nigerian Names- 5
How Nigerian- 3
Total- 36
_*Review: Considering the content and length of this story, I think it still has a lot to be built upon, but it is indeed a fair start. This writer has some literary prospects, as it is evident that she has got a lot of stories to tell, and having content is the first step to creating a piece of writing. Nevertheless, I'd like to encourage that she work greatly on improving her presentation, expressive, descriptive and literary skills. She needs to improve her vocabulary too, as there were a lot of incorrect tenses and spelling errors in the story. I recommend that in addition to continuous practice through writing, she also read more books by authors across Wattpad, in order to learn various writing styles and improve her literary skills.*_
🇳🇬 In her haste by @metrix25
IN HER HASTE REVIEW
Cover- 7
Title- 3
Description- 7
Opening Line- 5
Spelling- 6
Voc Dev- 6
Character Dev- 7
Nigerian Based- 2
Nigerian Names- 1
How Nigerian- 2
Total- 46
Review: 'IN HER HASTE' was a good read. The concept was quite refreshing too. The writer expressed her ideas very clearly and in an easily relatable way. Although, as refreshing as it was, it did not portray sufficiently the Nigerian concept, heritage or unique atmosphere, as this awards aims to promote. Also, the writer's needs to work on her spelling and vocabulary, in order to sharpen her writing skills and improve her literary prowess. Nevertheless, the writing was okay, in general.
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Third position goes to.
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🇳🇬 Bullied ( 10 confessions of a troubles teen) by book-lover6
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*1. 'BULLIED: (10 Confessions of a Troubled Teen)' By Book-lover6*
Cover- 6
Title- 2
Description- 6
Opening Line- 6
Spelling- 7
Voc Dev- 7
Character Dev- 8
Nigerian Based- 12
Nigerian Names- 7
How Nigerian- 9
Total- 70
Review: With regard to the Nigerian context, this story was quite a brazen move. And its effectiveness in execution was very satisfactory. Her skillful use of mystery, suspense, intrigue and other literary elements was very impressive. The urge to see how the story ends remained kindled throughout the entire course of the story. However, she needs to improve on her expressive and descriptive powers, as they were not as vivid as they could have been. She also needs to work on vocabulary development and spelling errors. She has got great potential, and will excel with consistent practice
~S. B. Chukwuka
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Second position goes to.
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🇳🇬Trafficked by Ezeala
Cover: 9/10
Title: 4/5
Description: 8/10
Opening line: 7/10
Spellings: 8.5/10
Vocabulary development: 7.5/10
Character development: 8.5/10
Nigerian based: 12/15
Nigerian enough: 8/10
Nigerian names: 10/10
Total: 82.5/10
The cover matched perfectly to the title. I was intruiged by the description which made me so eager to see what the book really entailed.
The opening line was simple, unique and nice. The storyline matched it's description and I loved how you gradually developed you characters, giving details needed. However, you need to check your spellings and use of words.
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The winner of the short story category goes to.
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🇳🇬 Her mother in law by LazypenNaija
'Her Mother In Law' by LazypenNaija*
Cover- 6
Title- 5
Description- 9
Opening Line- 8
Spelling- 7
Voc Dev- 7
Character Dev- 8
Nigerian Based- 15
Nigerian Names- 9
How Nigerian- 10
Total- 84
_*Review: This story was indeed a page turner. The character development was masterful and the Nigerian theme exquisite. The writer portrayed many essential aspects of the Nigerian narrative in a very humorous and refreshing way, making it not only an interesting but a fulfilling piece to come by. She is a talented writer, who is great at vividly passing her message along with its emotions across. However, she needs to work on her literary artistry and descriptive powers, in order to tailor her writing skills to perfection. Great job!*_
~S. B. Chukwuka
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