Okay so I decided I want to change how the story goes and everything because idk I don't really like how everything is flowing, I'm not gonna change the story completely obviously but I want to add some tweaks to make it better

I know no one will read or comment on this but if you happen to be reading this please comment ideas for the following things I want to add:
-playlist
-Characters style/aesthetic
-Chapter names
-other ideas

I kinda have ideas of the aesthetics I want the characters to have but I also want to know what you think their aesthetic should be too.

I also want to change the humor in this and I don't want to make this story as cliche either

So as I edit these chapters you may want to reread the "book"

Thanks for reading!