Hello, people. This is the last bill that will tell which building has the most points. Congratulations to StarCrossedBooklover (entry 1) for winning Bill V! Points will be added to your building. Make sure you comment or PM me the prize you'd like to choose.

REWARDS: (You can only choose one.)

1. 10 votes on a book of your choice.

2. Free Salary: I will PM you a key word that you can use whenever you'd like to use this command, which means you're able to get free salary (1 point added to your building) and will be featured in the "Pay Day" chapter. But wait, there's a catch. To get this "free" salary, you will have to answer a question correctly which I will ask through PM if you choose this prize. You can use this command whenever you'd like to.

3. Opponius Trickstiticus: I will Pm you a keyword that you can use whenever you'd like to use this command, which means you're able to take away one point from any building of your choice. As long as you can answer a question I will give you correctly. The question will test you on what you know about the users in the building you want to sabotage.

I also had some comments to add on to everyone's stories to help you improve your writing. Don't take them personally, just some friendly opinion I'd like to give. :)

COMMENTS:

Entry 1

Amazing job on your murder mystery. There was definitely a lot of action and just a lot going on in general. I loved how it definitely kept me on the edge of my seat and I really wasn't expecting who the murderer was, which definitely puts the "mystery" in murder mystery. I loved the setting you chose for your story and just how you described it was lovely!

Entry 2

I also really loved this entry too. I'm glad you turned in the entry even though you struggled with writing it. Your writing style was fantastic but the murderer was a bit easy to guess who it was. Although I love your idea and plot you came up with! Good job! :)