For this challenge, I will give you two weeks to finish this. This bill will be different from the rest, you will be partnered up with your fellow competitors. The person you're partnered up with will be who's story you are going to read. I will instruct you on which story of theirs you will be reading, and you only have to read the first chapter of their story. (Prologues and summaries DO NOT count.) After you're finished reading the first chapter, you will leave a comment on the chapter of what they could work on and what you enjoyed about it. (Pros and the cons.) In the same comment, you will also include a quote from the chapter, make sure it is the best quote you can choose. After you're completely finished, PM me that you're done so I know that you've actually done the bill.

Partners:

Thunderecho - The Legend of Shadow Arrow Book 1, The Avengers
&
that_book_girl_lily - Murder in the Newsroom

MonicaTheCrybaby - Orphan- Hetalia
&
justaawkwardperson - Back to Life

PackerBacker2 - Careful
&
PlanetaryHut (me) - The Product of Navi Elswood's Halloween

Criteria
• Read the first chapter of your partners story.
• Comment the pros and cons of the story and include a quote from the chapter.
• PM me when you're finished.
• Tell me if your partner does not ever comment on your story.

DUE DATE
June 26th, 2016 at 5 pm (Berlin time)

Please tell me when you're finished through private message. If you cannot do the bill for whatever reason, please notify me.