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Canvas of Deception by EclipseNoir123

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 10/10

Tense: 10/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 10/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 40/40

Review: I was extremely pleased with the grammar and writing style. I couldn’t point out a single mistake. A great book. Keep it up.

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Unrequited Beginnings by
@lanadelreygirlie

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 10/10

Tense: 10/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 9/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 39/40

Review: There are absolutely no grammatical errors in the book. Maybe you can add more artistic words to describe the feelings.

Fictional obsession by Mariyakim14

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 10/10

Tense: 10/10

Sentence formation and Vocabulary: 7/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 37/40

Review: Punctuation marks and tense usage were perfect and I couldn't find any spelling errors. However, I think you could change some sentence formations to make it sound better.

“Why do you always come home so late… “ Her mother’s voice, sharp and accusatory, cut through the walls.

You can write this instead.

“Why do you always come home so late… “ Her mother’s sharp and accusatory voice cut through the walls.

There were many places, I personally think you could have made the sentences less complex. And a bit more focus on new and unique vocab would do great.

Overall a well-written book. Keep it up.

Lafz-e-mohabbatein by TanshinaAfrin

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 9/10

Tense: 10/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 8/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 37/40

Review: The tenses were errorless and I haven’t found any noticeable spelling errors.

However, there are minor errors in other places. For eg.

“Beta, some ‘Neela Devi’, wants to meet you.” This is grammatically incorrect as ‘some’ doesn’t make any sense in the sentence.

Also you have confused between Neela and Neel.

Besides these minor mistakes, everything is fine. Grt work.

Cyber Hearts by delulu_alex

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 8/10

Tense: 8/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 9/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 35/40

Review: The punctuation marks and spellings were almost perfect. There were minor errors in the tense. Like the first line

“The city of Neon Haven pulsed with life, its neon lights flashing everywhere.”

Its à it is.

It should have been ‘it was’.

Also here is where I found a punctuation error too. As a reader, these are minor mistakes but as a judge 2 mistakes in the first line itself are trivial.

Almost all sentences were well formed and your use of vocabulary impressed me. However, there were a few sentences that I found grammatically incorrect.

“You say that like it’s a bad thing.”

You could have written, “You are saying as if it’s a bad thing.”

Overall great work. Try to fix these errors and it will be perfect.

A Mazed Heart by Rifa_Fathma_

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 8/10

Tense: 10/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 7/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 35/40

Review: No spelling errors and tenses were also perfect.

You can make certain sentences less complex and make use of new words from the dictionary. In some places the punctuation was wrong.

Thin Air by Jahools

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 7/10

Tense: 10/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 6/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total : 33/40

Review: Tenses were perfect and I haven’t found any spelling errors.

However, you have made unnecessary complex sentences that ruin the main motive of your words.

“He was on his way home, headed there after a long day at work”

You can write it as:

“He was headed home after a long day at work.”

In this line,  “he mercifully settled into a seat on the crowded bus, thinking of her embrace and being immediately comforted when she’d pull him into it, when his phone chimed with an incoming message.”

This is unnecessarily complex and lacks many punctuation errors. Some words ‘mercifully settled’, ‘embrace and being immediately comforted’ – they sound grammatically incorrect.

Also this line,

“N-Not long,” …

The correct one will be “N-not long”, …

I hope you keep these in mind and make the changes. Overall, good work.

What if Geto is your master? by mothboyikari

Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement: 9/10

Tense: 5/10

Sentence Formation and Vocabulary: 8/10

Spelling errors: 10/10

Total: 32/40

Review: The book is one of the rare finds and as a JJK fan I loved reading it. I found some mistakes in the subject-verb agreements. Some helping verbs were missing in minor places.

The tense is where I have deducted the points. There is a sudden switch from present to past tense in narration. While writing a novel, you must stick to past tense only, even if the timeline is in the present.

There weren’t any observable errors in sentence formation but I suggest you can use some good vocabs.

I didn’t find any spelling errors. Overall I enjoyed reading it as a uniquely plotted book.

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