Reviewer: Eloeide

Book: Sunshine be Mine by Cheems1234

Genre: Poetry
Chapters read: 9 out of 14
Rating: ★★★★☆

The cover of this book is undeniably beautiful. The title is enchanting, setting the stage for a collection of romantic poems that is further confirmed in our blurb, which is beautifully expressed. The opening lines, 'Unsaid things are better spoken through poetry. Poems are the best whisperers of secrets,' are attention-grabbing. For enhanced visual appeal, I would suggest separating them into two different paragraphs, such as:

'Unsaid things are better spoken through poetry. Poems are the best whisperers of secrets,'

Alternatively, they could be joined with a dash, like this:

'Unsaid things are better spoken through poetry-poems are the best whisperers of secrets.'

The comparisons drawn in the poems, intertwining themes like stars, nights, broken hearts, and wistful smiles, evoke the yearning for a loved one or a memory, even if that memory may not be entirely real but fits perfectly within the scene.

The structure of these poems consists of a single stanza, typically ranging from 16 to 38 lines (one to two pages). Their organization in concise verses makes for an easily digestible read, whether rhyming or not, although most poems maintain a rhythmic pattern.

What truly captivated me was the depth of emotion expressed throughout. While romance is a frequently explored theme in poetry, your collection stands out for its focus on memories and genuine affection, delving beyond the physical aspects of love. Each poem resonated with me, capturing the essence of natural love and cherished moments.

Scorecard:

The concept (Cover, Title, and Foreword): 15/20

The expression (Imagery and Flow of words): 30/30

Overall: 45/50